With the Grammarly online service your second fan will come back and join us...probably. There's something innately satisfying about the unique brand of suffering you've illustrated. Also I've been waiting for this genre of superpowered -philia for a while. Hopefully after 100 chapters you'll start on a masochist system novel.
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While the concept is solid, the story itself needs a lot of work. It's something of a Wattpad quality, which should tell more than a thousand words.
Don't waste your time this is a troll. complete bs using the system which is still in beta. the whole novel is a beg for votes. the dumb idiot wrote a line or two and copy posted it into 7 chapters. Please remove this abomination from the novel list.
Keep up the great work. This is a really great story keep it up. Please don't stop writing this story because I like it a lot.....................................................................
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Waste of time. MC is a family man when it comes to mommy, sister and daddy, but just kills random people over stupid crap like wanting a tour guide. That isn't even a good demon lord, that's just a psycho MC who you can't even like. Dude can break a kid's arm over an interuption, kill families and scheme in the dark like a rat, then wants to bow his head down to mama and papa over everything. Lived for millions of years, made this world, was sad over losing his loved ones, then he himself inflicts that same pain on random people for nothing at all. I don't understand how crappy someone can be when developing character, but this author wins lol. He is either a demon lord aka 100% evil, or some b.s family/demon lord where he kills enemies but is at least tolerant to strangers like he was with the village elder and those girls. Why didn't he become evil then? They mean ABSOLUTELY NOTHING TO HIM. His behavior is such a joke based on this bad writing. But you managed to turn him into some psycho. Random people fighting against a beast, let's scheme to kill them all, muahaha. No, that is just shìtty writing. This is the so called demon lord? Seriously? A mommy's boy one chapter, a crazy MC who kills random people for nothing at all the next? Yeah, dropping this confusing pile of dog turd. And it's been out for 4 damn months and we're just on chapter 79? No thanks. Slow ass updates.
So far a very interesting story. I like the style of writing.
(140 characters, 140 characters,140 characters,140 characters,140 characters,140 characters)
Very good so far. I recommend this to everyone. This is a very good story from what I read so far after reading the chapters. 5 stars from me
copy paste and speed run of the original with some changes and forced romance with stuttering stalker Hinata again. Don't bother, Very dull story and you're just waiting and waiting for something to happen to make the story interesting but it doesn't happen