I cant say alot about this story because I didnt get further than the first chapter... the grammar just kulled my reading spirit and i couldnt go on
From other reviews it seems like the story itself is praiseworthy, but I will have to wait until the author finds an editor.
Please fix your grammar!!!
oh ****, holy ****, author, if you're going to write a novel of this kind, do it right, because it gives cancer to the eyes, this novel deserves the Nobel prize for being the **** **** of the year.
This is the type of novel that I never knew I wanted, but once I read it, I fell in love with it. It's cute, adorable, simply fluff and sugar overload. Though, at the same it, it has a good consistent story, with good character planning, in which they feel like 3D characters, instead of some randoms. The jokes in this story are well though out, they are not exactly repetitive and they bring out the personality of the various characters in the novel. I dunno, I just love the story. I recommend giving it a try simply to experience what a well though out sugar overload feels like.
Ok I'm confused. Which story should I listen to because one story just changes to anime in the middle of the whole thing. It went from Debbie to some girl name Mya and mutliverves.
this novel is so good 5 stars
Hello everyone! Thanks for your support so far. I will try to give my best with this book and also I will try to update as much as possible. If there is anything that you point out abou the story or character design or any other things, please let me know. One last thing, I still need to edit some chapters , I will try to edit them as soon as possible.
Free chapter were edited to make it look good...after chapter 40 it became bad very fast...no editing at all...just mtl....just delete your translation group its just trash...you should be ashamed of yourself for doing such a bad job
feels like ive been scammed seriously. first 40 chapters are well written then from now on its a mtl badly translated novel, feels bad using batch unlock and discovering this after
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I think this story is above average, but it's not 10/10
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