The perfect sadist system

Nice.Good story.The 1st chapter have some errors.Do your best and thanks for the story.

Hey guys the author here I giving myself an full mark because well everyone does and I don’t want to fall behind the times and  to those people that read this lousy novel thank you for not stopping reading my novel even tought my English suck and it really does I meant you just have to read this review to know that

I’m really enjoying the story so far. I haven’t heard of a sadistic system so far so this is originally for me. I like the take your doing with the story and can’t wait for more. The only bad said for me as a fluent English speaker is that the grammar is pretty bad. As long as the improve upon that or get someone to proof read then it should be all good. Best wishes from a new fan and hope to see the story continue

Just continue this is reallu go goddddddddddffffffffffffffffffff reallyyyyyyyyyyyy gooood yaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy use please dont stop at midway like ither novels i meatb thar really suck i think you cant understand that fucking pain, right?

Quit while your ahead the dialog in this is horrible. Its like reading a chat log for example,
Char A says "..."
Char B "...."
Add that onto the fact that the entire premisis of the novel is some S&M fans fap fantasy its not worth the loss of brain cells.

Didn't expect this to be a hidden gem. It's a pretty good story with a unique system. But it's grammatical mistakes doesn't allow usual readers to enjoy it.  Only one who have comprehended the "the dao of MTL" and reached a high realm in it like my humble self can enjoy reading this work.
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And ooh yes there are H-scenes.......
You can Thank me later.