You ever coming back or are you dropping this
Your progression and story telling is way to rushed and crude.the way you started the story was nice but your follow through doesn't feel worth it at all....
the more you read, the more immersed you get into the world. Starts slow but the story is very intricate and filled with mysteries. what i love the most is that no small detail is meaningless, if you give this a try you'll get what i mean.
This is good for me. I will continue reading... I love the whole setup. I am also looking forward to how the story develops since I cannot remove myself from each chapter. Ah! Did your landlord chase you out? Just take me along too.
Don’t stop keep going great book keep up the good work
a story about a man going back 10 year's in the past just before the doomsday started OR a story about a man going back AND collecting all the famous and beautiful girls from the past and making them say 'LORD' to him!! I was so cringed at that, that i nearly closed the the app right there
No modern setting novel have been chosen in a long time so hope this or the body swap novel get will get chosen. So the MC get a system and he can get money through breathing or some task. He can lvl up the system through spending money which will give him more money each breath. He can also gain abilities through doing normal life stuff like eating or sleeping.
The MC will get cooler. At the beginning it might not seem like it but later on he bought an item through the system that make him more mature. Not 100% sure if this is a harem novel, it will probably be a harem which is quite sad(for me) but I can deal with it.
The novel is probably not for people who look for every mistake or bad thing about the novel. There are stuff that doesn’t make sense like how did the system appear out of nowhere? Or how the MC doesn’t act like how a normal person would react if they got a system.
If it doesn't get picked up, Webnovel should just change its name to TRASHNOVEL.
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Great Story! Cultivation + Funny + Detailed World + Great Plot + Amazing yet Cautious MC
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You have to know just one thing: If the MC plan fails then there is a backup plan and if that fails, there's another backup plan and so on.
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That aside!
It is one of the well-written cultivation novels. Not your everyday generic trash cultivation novel. It is filled with humor, great schemes, and amazing fighting scenes.
If it doesn't get picked up, Webnovel should just change its name to TRASHNOVEL.
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I'm a simple guy; I see Piokilek as the author's name, I read it. But I don't think I will like any novel more than SC. That was the first novel I read on this site and what motivated me to write too.
Whole Novel seems to Copy Paste...
Also why the hell People Spamming 5
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