this is definitely the worst novel in the current trial read. the mc is an absolute moron, very unlikeable.
The worst part is that I have never read a story with so many "coincidences" and clichés before. do know know the meme where people accidentally have s*x? this novel is worse. its trumping itself every chapter.
There is really nothing possitive about this novel except a rather good grammar. the translator seems to do his job right but there are still many switched up words. the translator later clarified that it is like that in the raws
THIS DESERVES SO MUCH MORE ATTENTION!!!!! I´m looking forward to all the things that happen in the future and how this novel develops! It has potential!! Huge recommendation!
A breath of fresh air when compared to the other sci-fi novels on this site. The pacing of this story is very welL done in my opinion, as it not only draws readers into the world, but it provides world development that does not seem too fast paced.
I just read the first chapter and it was amazing, I love how it goes into detail and I just can’t wait to read more. I think this book is going to be really good
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The plot was a bit common with the same orphan thing in the starting but still, you did your best to make it different from others. The book is still in its starting stage so I can't say much about it but I bet its a promising novel.so keep it up and sorry for the late review.
I will summarize what I feel when I reading this story in one sentence. "It would be a much better story if author just write it as a fantasy story". I like how he tells story especially how he make the MC shine in his story. I like it. But... since this is a VRMMORPG story, the game itself has not so good game structure and it also show how bad author deal with numbers. I expect a lot of readers to have ? in their head when reading some gaming logic and numbers in this story.
This is a copy of another novel with the same name. Didn’t even bother to change the cover. I will now 1 star all of your stolen novels. Imagine stealing IP. You don”t even translate them. You just steal them from other sites.
I love the story is had a good plot and environment. And it's really engaging it one of the good cultivation novels on the site and I hope to see more.
I would highly recommend this novel. I have never seen a novel that has been this detailed about magic and the system is also pretty unique in its own way which makes this even more interesting. It is refreshing to see such a competent main character that actually have passion about his job and is actually a great person with a great personality. I would love to thank the author for how well his story is coming along.
when will you continue writing the first novel one human now parasite atleast let us that you are continue are notok