Menuda estupidez, la gente que pone 5 estrellas es obviamente para vacilar al autor, si es que se le puede llamar así, en definitiva, historia: 0, personajes: inexistentes, una completa basura
I really hate this story, it doesn't make any sense for example the best vr company make game with tutorial that don't teach any thing mc get bad titles from tutorials because he can't make good items,it have ai that don't help any how just tch , he see world boss in beginner area and he kill it with luck but story say he have bad luck, like how? Kill the crafter after making some beginner item? It doesn't make any sense, he make item that break the game and game company say he come for deal What is this game? Just for grave and shovel he obliterate a dungeon?IF YOU WANT A STORY THAT MAKE SENSE DO NOT READ I REPEAT DO NOT READ
Very well written so far, it has a "I solo level up" isekai feel which you will understand once you get to chapter 13, fight scenes are good anddont bore the reader. Looking forward to how it progresses :)
Oh boy, Qi Peijia's back at it again, with hopefully another banger.The quality of writing is generally really good these first 40 chapters. The conflict with the MC's family at the start, and the way society and familial relationships have changed (as briefly described by the author) feels really nice- it's always felt to me that in the far future, where lifespan is less of an issue, emotional ties would inevitably get weaker and people would become more liberal. This is probably the first novel I've read which encapsulates this idea, where the third son is sacrificed for the greater good. The dialogue itself is pretty good, and the English names are not that bad, unlike a lot of other Chinese novels.I was excited with LotM-esque acting/synchronisation with apostles, but that's barely been mentioned or reared its head.Here come the complaints.I may be biased because I just do not like novels which come under the theme of "MC travelling to experience other worlds for the sake of enriching their own". It's great for an author who can write well, because they essentially get access to multiple different settings in one novel. The issue is that in most other novels, these worlds do not intersect with the main one, character interactions are never invested in, and therefore never effect the MC in any particular way. I've a feeling it'll be different this time, with the first two apostles being sent to the same world, but the issue with character development remains- those side characters who the MC meets in Terra are pretty 2D. They aren't interesting at all, and the world background there is also really basic. The death of Will, who they only knew for a week, was overreacted- nobody would feel that sort of exaggerated emotional connection, regardless of what they'd done for you in that time in comparison to other characters who they'd lived and fought aside for much longer, like Dean. (Though Baron/Barong's reaction was more realistic, grieving for the loss of talent rather than Will himself).I fundamentally disagree with the way Terrans treat strangers in the alt world, and also the methods of the hunters. You'd expect an experienced hunter, who's spent their entire life fighting monsters and subterraneans, to be capable of devising early warning systems, or other methods to combat ambushes etc. Apparently not. Second, the author says they trust easily to unite against common enemies, which is just untrue no matter how you mince this matter. Wherever there's power, there's politics and therefore conflict. This is always true, regardless of sophistication. Enough said.Lastly, the character change and adaptation for the MC is too abrupt. Either the author rushed the change, or he didn't explain the MC's original feelings towards his family that well. I'm inclined towards the former. Firstly, no matter how gifted your "battle instincts" are, it just seems far to unrealistic to immediately be capable of fighting a mutant monster straight from nightmares on your first experience. Instincts are also not Matrix-esque powers, but reflex movements made WITHOUT and BEFORE thinking, good instincts do NOT allow you to see things in eagle-eye vision in slow motion. That's a different superpower all together. Next, one week's time is not enough time for a character's behaviour and personality to undergo a complete change, to the point where his own family would not recognise him. This is rushed, and I'm a little dissapointed.To be honest, the way the MC acts is pretty similar to Old Driver Xiao, from TLM, I don't really have an issue with that, due to the familiarity, but I thought it was worth putting out here.Anyway, that's all for now. Despite my criticisms, I really hope this novel improves (and is selected), it's far better than the other trash in this queue despite its flaws, which I also hope it can improve upon.I also have a hunch that Peijia is going to put a twist on this genre that's been nothing but failures from its conception, so stay tuned, I s'pose.~Jezza.
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A very interesting novel. I would recommend it to all readers. It is different, and has a unique way of capturing the minds of the readers. All the best for the author, and keep up the good work
Water... Earth... Fire... Metal... Wood. Long ago, the Cultivation World lived together in disharmony. Then, everything changed when the Wilderness attacked. When the world needed Spiritual Force most, it vanished. Only the Avalon, fortress of all five elementalists, could stop the Wilderness... A thousand years passed before a fatty and a sand puppet discovered a new hero, a metal elementalist named Ai Hui. And although his swordfighting skills are great, he still has a lot to learn before he's ready to save anyone. But I, Lou Lan, believe Ai Hui can save the world.
not a romantic story but a investigation story.first we think it is a harrem but after reading 150 chapter there is only one girl until now.good readps: author is a kind of racist .when it comes to crual mass murder cases most of villians comming from Japan, us, or some other countries .only good villians like revenge for raped daughter / gf is Chinese. you feel disgust while if you are from other countries especially us ,Japan , Taiwan etc
How can he have a godzilla and hide? ???This doesn't make sense?.... ...... ..... .. .... ..... . .... ...... ....... ......... ..... ... .. .. ... .... ...... . ?
For you who are from another country and do not know how to read English, we fucking saw you spent ss in this sh!t and I can not read by the computer, only by the app that is a sh!t that does not translate.print: http://prntscr.com/ogki7jis my friends I was in the application very happy hoping that if I released the chapter, once it was already privileged, they would launch on the computer, and to my surprise appears what appeared in the picture, released only to read on the phone.Do not get me wrong I do not hate the soap opera, I just do not like this fucking app fucking, my finger is scratching to send the sons of a whore from this capitalist site go f-u-c-k themselves.
Well it's the best dc rebirth novel so far I read but I only found it now and the last update had been 8 month. Have you dropped this novel? Please continue
One of those books where the world is created for the MC. The system is there to give him items to solve any hardships. The people are obedient and submissive to him. Everything happens too quickly without any attention to detail. Im getting edgelord vibes from the MC, so I’m gonna call it quits and leave this review.