Warlord of the Endless Hive

It's a very interesting plot! Well written and a very smooth read. I'm having such fun reading it, I can relate to Elle and her love for food! Ahah, I laugh all the time when she bows to her boss calling him Magesty. And I'm sure even Elle will be surprised in her own novel... Congratulations! ??

How can he have a godzilla and hide? ???This doesn't make sense?.... ...... ..... .. .... ..... . .... ...... ....... ......... .....   ... .. .. ... .... ...... . ?

Author pls fix the mc it's really annoying ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

absolute garbage. clearly just the most generic and low effort writing. thinks having meaningless conflict for the sake of conflict and nothing more is actually a good thing. disgusting.

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I dunno how should I say this...the concept of your story is really something new that I've read.I've read upto chapter 6 so far. The story is great...u've given a decent info about the world background and cultivation too in a sense I guess but it just seems kinda bland  to me I don't know why! The mentality of MC seems kinda weird to me (in my opinion atleast) one moment he is feeling betrayed and tries to deny the whole thing and in the next he is determined to be the best all of a sudden, and it's not bad but it did feel strange.All in all its a good story with potential I think, u have good chapter length and great grammar. So keep up the good work man. Cheers!