Aaron shifted under the others intense gaze. The eyes of the onlookers only added to the rising stress in his system, making him open his mouth to voice out his thoughts.
Mia was re-reading the message she sent. She was trying to figure out if she typed everything correctly.
Thank you for all the positive feedback, enthusiasm, and suggestions. I am delighted and honored by all of you, my readers. As a beginner writer, I welcome your input and suggestions to help me improve. ?
still need an improvement but the characters are good for me it's just that the plot and story still need more push
Your style is different from the novels I read since it doesn't have a lot of prose. The writing style you have is not bad and is actually it is easy to understand. It is good and easy to read, and the flow of the story is good also. I probably got used to reading old fashioned novels or format but it does not matter. There is a lot of reference too that I can relate, especially in the first few chapters. It really did crack a smile on my face and is really entertaining. My verdict for the story is 4.6/5.0. I noticed some minor mistakes in capitalization and spelling but proofreading and some edits can fix them. It's a good story in overall and please do not give up writing. I find it a good read and entertaining at the same time.Thank you for reading this review!The TradeMaker
me.encanta la historia es muy buena. podría pasar el día entero leyendo
for now i'll watch it cause don't has harem or at least i guess so, and looks interesting, if i like it i'll back to edit this coment
Extremely superb I love the plot that he was reading story for dead person awsome. And when he sniffed the poison I want new volume I am curiously waiting for its new volume
So far I'm really annoyed with the story. The mc is stupid. The things he says as well as his actions annoy me so much for some reason. He has a weak personality that makes me feel like he will constantly be pushed around. There are also several Grammer errors although it's readable and not nearly as bad as some of the stories on this app.
Its an interesting novel with a really good concept although there's a bit of grammar mistakes its because the author is from turkey i think
THIS IS STOLEN DO NOT READ the Real author already has 100s of chapters Out and thIs guy copied his work. real book is “stealing spree” by dyrem the real book is amazing by the way.
Interesting but slow paced. I am waiting for the rest of the story to unfold. There are things that are puzzling especially in Emma's case. One may question how and why her story began on hear deathbed. Over all, im glued!