A Wish Granted

Fights in this are like in Kung fu movies, MC fights 30 enemies of same cultivation and they just stand there and get killed by MC while all he gets is a couple cuts. It’s too exaggerated but fine, I can ignore it cause he fouGht beasts in the forest for 1 year so he got super combat sense now and everybody else never fought before in their life.?????Cartoonish Brain dead enemies and fellow disciples who mock him for being weak after casually slapping a guy with higher cultivation to near death. Everybody but MC is as smart as a child.Characters are so cliche it hurts, fatty friend and ice cold beauty who is only nice to MC. Monkey is cool I guess.Plot armor power ups that just fall on MCs head from nowhere, the woman at the start, fine that’s his ‘cheat’, but I can’t help but roll my eyes when an ancient cultivator who’s been fighting poison for 5000 years saves MC out of sure death then gives him all his possessions and asks nothing of him in return. No bring my corpse back to my sect, or spread my ashes in my village. It’s like his sole existence was to drop off treasures for the MC then die to his poison.Not good but not that bad either, it can still be entertaining but it’s nothing special.???

Thanks, man pagpatuloy moyan ah, pag hindi sapakin kita hayp ka haha!...

This book has a lot of potential, The MC isn't conceited, show-off,  or generic progatonist. He's patient and carefree, which emphasizes the humor behind his naivety. Haven't encountered face slapping scenes or other cliche events yet. It's quiet fun and refreshing to read, the MC's nonsense are pretty humorous and also characters' confusion and helplessness toward MC.

The book starts off ok the plot is a bit slow and cliche but was overall decent. that is until the fbi is brought in the mc becomes careless leaving all types of holes for him to be captured ..im not into reading about beta, soft hearted, or easy to manipulate mcs. Unfortunately the mc fits two of those categories. This is my main reason for dropping....good luck to the author

I'm only a fraction of the way into this but I'm hooked hardcoreGenuinely a very unique idea, and an interesting take on it as well. It being a prequel of sorts to Swtor leaves a whole lot of paths open, and it has my thoughts on overdrive trying to figure out what might come nextThis may update once I'm caught up with the remainder of what's up now, but so far, definitely looking forward to seeing where this goes

So, how shall I put this, the story seems a bit bland due to the writing style. The story in itself is promising with a hard working transmigrated MC, and the difficulty leveling and growing in a real world fantasy. The growth progress is steady, with steady plot. There is some stereotypes but such is life.