Although the novel started out great and was really interesting, after a while it fell short. After about 30-35 chapter in the novel in started to feel bland and boring.
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Guys don't judge the story by its cover, it is a really good story with all the description needed to understand what's going on. The plot is also good...... you should really try it.
Good terminologies with real like situations. Pls keep updating the story. The author has done some real research and knows about the SF community in detail
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Umm This novel is very good I am not that good at judging story's but I really enjoyed it I recommend it Btw Author please publish more chapters DONT YOU DARE DROP IT
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this is the best book i've yet to have read ! so well edited and a really good book overall! when i started reading this book i could not stop !
This is an amazing story.... it feels alive unlike many others. Have you read a great book before? Like a book by Brandon Sanderson or someone similar? You see when you read their books you feel that their characters are alive... living and breathing and here the characters are just as alive, they almost come to life on text and paper. Through what we’ve seen so far they seem way better characterized than any book currently in the trial read and even on the entire platform! It’s hard to come up with a book to match up with its characterization. It’s these living characters that make this an amazing book to read. If I’m forced to put it in words it’s kind of like Kingdom’s bloodline in the way that the plot seems extremely well put and is thought ahead by the author although of course it isn’t as deep in politics and consequences as that monster of a novel which you should really read if you haven’t, but still it’s a very well thought book by the author here, you really can just tell by reading it that the author is certainly very skilled and well it certainly deserves a lot of praise from me at least.
Okay now onto the second part of my review, let me address some of the issues... I guess firstly I think some people here worry if there’s a romance involved or even if there’s a harem so yeah let me disappoint those of you who don’t want any romance at all by saying yes there’s a romance, and well it’s a good one at least so don’t run away just yet. It’s a mutual thing, the romance; it’s grown in the story and well the Mc and female character let’s say is very compatible for one another and although I haven’t read into the raws I am fairly certain there won’t be any harem. If there is one I’ll be disappointed a little bit but still if the author can make it work I’ll be alright with it. Besides the romance which may put off some of you readers really this novel doesn’t have any major flaws. It’s fairly refreshing to the cultivation genre; it doesn’t share the many clichés of its many generic and boring fellow counterparts and well it’s intriguing and exciting which is very hard to achieve, well hard to find at least here on webnovel.
So yeah as you can see from this long rambling review I really like this novel. It’s interesting, engaging and well just very exciting to read! You actually care about the people here and well goddamn if that isn’t amazing. Really try it! I swear to God you won’t regret it too much at least; I give my Cat King promise on that. So go on my fellow reader and thank you for reading this damn long winded review.
it's a good book, it's a good book the Mc is well written the story is well-paced all in all it's a great cultivation novel so 7/10 for the Mc 9/10 for the cultivation 8/10 for the writing 6/10 for the story so far. more to come as i read
Very rough a lot of the problems can be easily solved though with a simple edit by someone even slightly proficient in english
The main character is incredibly edgy but expresses it immaturerly and incredibly often, as if he has 8th Grade Syndrome. His trigger word is death if you say that, or it even flits across his unstable little mind be prepared for a full on ****storm.
The largest flaws with the novel, in my opinion is the characters very exaggerated descriptions of himself and his the constant references to his past life, it doesn't really move on from that so your often pulled back to something that does not help build character depth
All of the characters are very one dimensional. All of the girls fall for the MC a little too easily.
The overall concept is interesting and the pacing and plot are pretty good.