The main character is the young (teenage?) Celestial Emperor, who escapes from home to explore the lower realms. Having never left home before because of his helicopter parents, he has no idea what life is like for mere mortals. He's OP, having mastered every skill as part of his training for being Celestial Emperor, and has reached what seems to be the peak level of cultivation. The plot of the novel so far is that he comes to the mortal realms and starts trying to travel incognito, but inadvertently shows his OPness, causing shock and awe and slapped faces everywhere he goes.
Overall I like the idea of the novel, but the author's insistence on stretching every face slapping event over several chapters killed my enjoyment of the story at round chapter 83. It's really not worth your time to read this until it has been completed, then you can skim the chapters to get the gist without being molested with filler after filler.
NOTE:- Don't judge the book with just the first 20 chapters! , It's only the prologue arc and the mc will get his class in the 21st chapter. You can't skip the prologue as it has the description of the main charachters.Do try it and comment if you like it~
Guess I have to miss all your awesome "charachters" then.
This is a story that will be almost daily updated, and it will be more frequently updated if it's liked.
I won't say much because you can check yourself whether you like the story or not. Any comments, thoughts, ideas and complaints are more than welcome.
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well I tried it, it's amazing the plot, the world build even the characters are all ok. I totally give it five stars and i recommend others too.[img=recommend]
My only problem with this is the constant info dumping. One moment 2 people are talking to each other, then after the first 2 sentences, we get an explanation on how strong they are, how much universes they could destroy/trancendence, what law they have and thiers background that. I feel like you could introduce these slowly, like when they fight you could tell us the law they used or how powerful they're skill was.
Alright, let me start this review by stating that I've only read till chapter 15 so the author might have improved after.
Now for the review itself, I'll start with what I do think the author did well. The best thing about this book is the updating stability with the book getting at least a chapter a day your list won't go a while before reading, now unfortunately that's where the good part kind of stops.
Now for the part I thought was the worst has to be the world-building and further the world itself, my reasoning for this is that whenever I'm reading I find myself highly confused as to why some things like plastic exist and then later I'm told they have gold coins as currency. The biggest cause of this problem in my opinion how the author glazes over things that are important to world-building and leads to a high lack of detail.
For the rest of the book, I find it to be mostly average with the writing quality being fine but with mistakes still very visible every chapter or so. Lastly, I would like to comment on the character design of this book which is very lacking so far landing as the second worst, in my opinion, the cause of this is how inconsistent the characters have acted compared to their introduction, an example is how Luke started the book by going to test if he had awakened at any opportunity but when given prove he might have he doesn't go test it.
I will conclude this review by giving my opinion on this book. I find the book so far to be not worth my time reading, I wouldn't go as far as to say the book is bad but it is highly mid so far.
If you have a problem with my opinion touch grass and read better books.
See ya
This is pretty much enjoyable i have a great time reading it .
Too much monologue decrease the interest in reading. also the explanation of various things are really vague. MC is more of a passive types with no flirting skills just want to f**k girls,
The premise itself is good, and the characters in MC's new world are interesting, especial So Won. If it's going to become *cough cough* BL *cough cough cough* I'd eagerly be following along. It's fine if it's not, though, I could just silently ship the characters from the safety of my couch ^0^
I read past chapter 3, and though there were still some tricky parts, the writing becomes much better from there. I strongly recommend for any author to use Grammarly before publishing (and no, I'm not getting paid to endorse it this damn much). I have it installed in Chrome, it's my last line of defense before releasing a chapter.
Here, there were still minor errors in the first two chapters that I didn't address because I'm pretty sure the free version of Grammarly would catch them just fine. That said, author, please take this as a gesture of goodwill because I saw in the forums how worried you were--
Chapter 1:
lion and his songs that
--> and WITH his songs that
the 75,000 seats in the stadium were full
--> were FILLED (to capacity).
Kim Chun Ha appeared on stage
--> make it "onstage" -- no space
a 19-year-old boy with black hair and green eyes of 179cm entered -- like this, it sounds like it's his eyes that's 179cm, so...
--> a 19-year-old boy OF 179cm, with black...
they needed to take a sleep
--> EITHER needed to sleep OR needed to take a nap
Jae Hyun decided to tell HER
--> tell HIM
In fact, I have already informed...
--> you forgot to add the opening quotation mark "In fact...
Do you even know dance? And just saying but when you agreed to give me your voice
--> Do you even know how to dance (not sure if this is what you meant, but "know dance" doesn't sound right)
--> make the next statement stronger by simply starting with "When you agreed to give..."
--> delete "and just saying"
He ignored what he had just told him before look at him and talk.
--> (Jae Hyun) ignored Chun Ha's words (I'd suggest naming at least one of the characters in a sentence if they have the same gender; it's to avoid confusion about who's doing what)
--> and simply looked at him before speaking.
Kim Chun Ha's anger lashed his mind and blew up.
--> I don't understand what you mean by "lashed his mind." Maybe it's best if you just say (his) anger blew up.
I make you regret being born
--> I'LL make you...
a shot was heard
--> a shot sounded OR rang out (to avoid the passive "was heard")
Once he would be cured
--> Once HE'S cured
Jae Hyun had a pinch in his heart
--> Jae Hyun's heart constricted
Chapter 2:
He tried to sit down,
--> sit UP
his body gave up to him
--> up ON him
his agency—if you say so—saved
--> did you mean "if you could call them that"?
Fake to sleep? Hid?
--> Fake sleep
--> Hide
Think to something
--> Think OF something
and the panic gradually spread to him
--> and his panic gradually spread (could use a different word here imo).
He was going to tell them their home truths!
--> "home truths" seems to be an idiomatic expression in French? Not sure, but it doesn't translate well, I would suggest a more common phrase like "tell them what's what"
Sorry I didn't force you.
--> Sorry, I shouldn't have forced you/pushed you too hard
"Am I still dreaming?", though he.
--> he thought.
--> a comma is not needed if the dialogue itself ends with a punctuation mark
Great, already that he wasn't very tall
--> ...he wasn't very tall to start with
Was it a contribution for being jealous
--> ...a retribution for...
What year and date are it today
--> What year is it? What's the date today?
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That's as far as I've gone editing. I really hope this would be of some help, it's not my intention to make you feel pressured or anything, but I'm sorry if that's how it turns out.
Best of luck from here on out as well :)
truly a hidden gem, I can feel the potential of this novel, it's still a bit early (only on chapter 120) I hope the author can deliver
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The book is well written and how the story unfold is really worth the wait for the writer's upcoming chapters! I love the book and look forward to more chapters! So please write more and make it more captivating! Thanks!