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Dont know why this story got popular ranking of 25 with only 24 golden tickets and 68 power stones lol. This is unfair to the originals here and it seems china stories have a higher ranking when most of it sucks. Pity a english webnovel that only emphasis on translations and not its original. This is so racist and nationalism since webnovel is China. Anyway back to this story. The cultivaiton realms are make up along the way and the MC cant meet the strong cultivation realms no matter what cos he has a system. Just a comedy story with no logic or world building.
What a waste of time, read to 1600 chapters and dropped cause the author writing quality is so illogical. MC is basically "OP" but brain dead at the same time. So many plotholes. The 1600 chapter really ended it for me. This is one of the few novels where I’d rather skim read instead because the author just word vomits a bunch of irrelevant information.
The only thing good about this novel is the idea of the plot that's it as for oyher aspects read below.
Main character -Is stupid. eg-He bought cure for his mother then forgot to give her.
Story-Full of holes . eg- there are so many cultivators but none can judge others cultivation level its just you can fly yuo are a titled one.
Other charecters-they try to act cunning but are forced by author act out the face slapping routine that to not properly.
SO PLEASE AVOID READING IT UNLESS YOU ARE A AUTHOR WHO WANT'S TO LEARN HOW NOT TO WRITE A NOVEL
What kind of site are you guys running? Just today I discovered two interesting novels I've been recommended which are different from the pack and you dropped both? Truly trashy work this site does if you still charge people what you do.
This is a review of the first twenty chapters. This story is a well written supernatural tale of a man who comes back to life in someone else’s body. The lead, Zhou Ze, was a doctor who was cut by a supernatural being and then died. He wakes up in the underworld, is attacked, and then wakes up as a wandering soul in his old hometown. Eventually, Zhou Ze is able to take over the murdered body of Xu Le. Unlike Zhou Ze who was an orphan, Xu Le has a complicated relationship with his family. Xu Le had a cold relationship with his wife. The plot has been balanced between Zhou Ze adapting to being reborn as a nonhuman and his development of ties to Xu Le’s family.
The author wisely uses character count to keep both the description rich and the story moving. The story point of view mostly stays with the main character which leads to time lapses and confusion about what actually occurred during some supernatural events. Many supernatural events have not been fully explained by the twenty chapter. Overall all this tale strongly represents mystery, supernatural, and slice of life genres with touches of romance and horror added. If you are looking for a clever fast paced story what will thrill you but not scare you please consider this work.
When the next update.i like the story as mc is more amusing and more thoughtful than MC in other fanbase novels
I'm not sure why people are falsely giving this good ratings than it actually deserves, are their standards so low?
I read 50chap which are free before deciding to stop wasting my time with this.
Chapters have so many errors, inconsistencies, grammar, spellings which breaks your immersion, even with readers pointing them out in paragraph comments Author didn't feel the need to fix it, shows much he cares about it.
Author sometimes say MC use mana then in next paragraph it's Qi. What??
"I have eyes but failed to see mount tai" typical Chinese saying, tell me is there a mount tai in that game world? if not why did someone from that world say it? it feels so wrong.
MC and his friends goes on calling each other brother, brother, brother it's super awkward. His friend spend thousands of years in game before MCs arrival yet there's no visible changes in his personality, he acts like a child along with MC and emotional moments are so forced.
Author uses CAPITALS to convey emotions are screaming/anger instead of describing them, feels like it's written by a school kid.
Story isn't original either, just another isekai but worse with chinese copy paste. The way they use "hidden" expert and other bs is just ugggh.
Lets do it a screen junkie way.
Welcome to world of martial arts where everyone, like everyone is jealous of mc of his gains but they will do nothing to get it..like seriously if this was some other novels, he would already been killed several times over.
After reading world's best martial artist, you will started this sort of genre but then you will read this ****, which is like cheap RIP off of it. Think again, same friend, a little sister, a poor family, a system which works credit system, a university exam but ths also tried to make it original by adding weird sort of humor which you will rarely get, additional cliche added so bad that you could puke.
But our hero is a kind hearted guy who keep selling things for free for no reason. Like, isn't his family poor, so he should probably try to earn more but you will literally find a ch where the fat freind of his giving him money like 1 sixth of it and he still dont wana take it. Our hero is smart too, like he let's others decide what will be the price of the thing only available to him.
Ok..this wasn't as good as others..anyway..the story is slow actually. Like in some 50 ch..he has done these, a fight after a month or so, some fights, giving everyone medicine bag for almost free, a fight and an another fight three months later..finished...no proper improvement in the story
Ok...in last I would suggest you go read, world's best martial artist...its like upper version of this Novel, ch should be about 400 something...you will probably love it...just no racism...he haven't done that..but it's in modern world China so who knows...reputation isn't the best...we will have to see for...now just read that...
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Although only the first chapter, it was good. It’s interesting with good details and descriptions. MC although we didn’t get a good grasp of him yet he seems good (?) we need more chapters to see.
I remember reading this story back when the author was going by Flambe. It's just as amazing as it was back then if not better. The MC is a type of xenomorph who ends up stranded in your typical fantasy world which drew me in instantly. I'm looking forward to seeing how it evolves and adapts. Keep up the great work.