Unfortunate Hero's Retirement Life
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  • Hotice
  • Status:Ongoing

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This is a work of fiction. Any names, characters, stories or events, are fictitious!

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At the most unfortunate day which also the luckiest day for Xing Heero, his village was attacked by a specter. He lost family, his childhood sweetheart, he lost everything. However, on the same day, the strongest man called Saint picked him up as his disciple.

After years of training under the strongest man, Saint. To fulfill his Grandfather's dream to be a Great Hero, Heero started his career as a Hero. Heero was determined to kill specter and would not let any child experienced the same experience as him.

However, maybe he had used all his luck to get the strongest man as his Master. Somehow, all of his achievement was stolen by the other heroes. The unfortunate event kept happening to Heero which led all of his achievement being robbed by the other Heroes.

In the last of his unfortunate event, he tried to kill God Specter, but it only ended him up sealed in Eternal Ice. The last moment before Heero lost consciousness, he vowed he would retire as Hero.

"Father! Mother! I will be obedient! I will stop to be Hero and continue our family line, please release me from this Eternal Ice!"

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Please proofread or get an editor.
It's really hard to follow with all the grammar errors. This is like using machine translation
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Author here. I am here shamelessly to give my own work with 5* :) and explain a bit about the story.

Our Mc is sealed for an unknown time, but when he woke up and broke the seal, he realized he was in a foreign land. Later, slowly but surely, our Mc will find out how he end up in this foreign land (Earth). He will slowly uncover the mysteries Earth experienced such as the catastrophe 600 years ago and so on. Please be patient with the slow start :)

I hope you enjoy my second work or maybe third? Nevermind, hope you enjoy my story :)
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Translation is pure terror.  You can get the same thing with machine translation..........................................................                               ........  .
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Simply unreadable.

I wanted to try this out, but it’s almost as if the author put a bunch high school-level words into a randomizer and spread them throughout his sentences in order to make his writing seem more chic.

There are commas in the middle of a phrase, comma splices everywhere, run-on sentences, non-sensical sentences, etc... You name it, this author has it. It’s almost as if this novel was written for companies to use for their interview examinations for incoming editors.

Let’s not even go over the chuunibyou plot and naming.

You want to try this novel? Go ahead. But don’t say you weren’t warned.
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I only managed to read the first few paragraphs before giving up. The idea shows promise the execution, though, does unfortunately not live up to that promise.

This story needs significant editing and spell-checking.
Maybe that gets better further into the story, but I find the sentence building and grammatical errors to be too off-putting to continue reading.
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