LordJA0U
It’s nice to see an mc that doesn’t solely fight on the front lines using a sword or a spear, instead this mc can buff people. Also, cat facts, what else needs to be said, go read it!
A beautiful and exemplary translation that is, to me, at professional level for a book featuring a complex love story between two outstanding characters. As a reader, you will never have enough and will just read without stopping ! Many, many thanks to the writer here that has taken such a HUGE work, delivering us chapters on a daily base and deserve immense success.
Truthful it may not be the first of it's kind. However, it has a great potential to be a satisfying story. The author has plans which helps readers to understand the plot and mc's development more and foresee the implied future of our mc. And I wish it to stay that way, also I expected a lot from our mc to not become an idiot for women since he was already matured before he transmigrated. And instead focused more on raising lots of powerful pets. Fighting ? Author, thank you for the story I pray for its completion
The introduction is complete garbage. A A
the story is really interesting, the world is practically alive on it's own(the tutorial part is a bit too close to the tutorial arc of The Second Coming of Gluttony for comfort tho). My main problem here are the characters cause they are too unreasonable or completely not self aware(this may be a bit comedic at times tho), the unreasonableness is my main problem cause at times it's just not that needed or is every person on the tutorial a criminal before being reborn ? Cause dudes have not even a slight of reasonable common sense. Even the big bad villain is actually a spoiled brat that thinks he's the smartest person alive. Also it just makes no sense that the tutorial becomes an absolute bloodbath when they are literally scrapping every soldier they can to hold their defense positions, they just needed to have a bit of supervision on the first floor, just a bit and they would have 300 or so more soldiers even if just cannonfolder, but beggars can't be choosers and they clearly NEED more soldiers to remain holding their forts, it just makes no sense that they just don't care about loosing 300 potential soldiers cause of stupid stuff. Anyway mostly me ranting but it just became too unbearable to remain reading without even complaining a bit about these stuff.
I love yonome, I love how selfish and sadistic she is so far I can't wait to see her character development and see what she becomes in the future
I actually like it. While it is not the most mentally challenging novel, it ain't braindead with countless plot armor devices that save the day. It has its plotholes and plot armor devices, but they are not overbearing. Just hope that it continues its pace and doesn't suddenly become a drastic overwhaul.
I like the story it's very unique itself focusing at a love story of how love is felt by A. I at the future. I also like the way on how you persistently produce chapters Looking forward for more chapters, Greetings from New Zealand
Writing: 3 stars because of the missing options.
Character: 3 stars becouse how boring his character is.
Story Dev.: 2 Mc Potential would be Top but it feels like average side character in other Novels
Update Stability:3 stars because I dont know.
Word B. : Nothing special thats wh 3 stars
Got f-ucking lured into reading this carwreck. Innovative, my as-s. It's just the same old faceslapping, young master, escalating realm-conflict bs all over again.
Nice teen novel. Author your plots are nice. But at first I couldn't the main character is male or female. My suggestion is that at indicate who is you main lead. Overall story is good. Keep it up. And good luck.[img=exp][img=exp]
Amazing work, the poetry in the start really gives vibes. keep it up, the characters and whole cast is amazing,can't wait for the end.
Xoxo
