Shalom boys and girls, here is my new book, although to whom I say this ..... no one even knows me.... Well, after I had covid, I lost my muse relative to the previous stories, so they are stopped until I want to continue them (maybe never. Accept it)
Awesome novel the only thing is that him hiding his identity seems a bit forced and unneccasry it really takes the thrill out of things makes it seem like there is nothing truly on the line
Diamond_AirLove it! Plot's great and as everyone else says, it updates frequently XD. Your work keeps improving too. Good job author and keep it up! Will be sticking with this one.
An amazing story so good that I never wanted it to stop❤️
The interesting thing here is the cheat power. Notably, one 'simplification' allows the MC to consume hot water instead of qi to cultivate a technique, which, wow, that's pretty cool. The worldbuilding is decent, and the novel is amusing.
Too similar to Astral Pet Store but I didn't mind it. One thing that bothers me though is he neglects his family too much and relies on plot armor to keep them safe. He could have done a lot more to make them stronger but let's them get taken away because he is too cautious when technically his employees and pets can overpower anyone. Author can just write no harm will befall the mom and sister until his dad is strong enough to help free them but any filial son will not take the risk.
There is some interesting things but at most mediocre character design, bland world background. Has no interesting and somewhat robotic character development. It has some potential if you are bored out of your mind. But I would say pass.
If you have a system you are not an extra .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. ... .. .. .. . .. .. .mmvvm.m.k... .. .. .. ..
I’m not saying this novel is bad or something but come on be real giving wine to a 8 to 9 year old kid are you dumb?
it seems like a copy and paste of worldwide simulation era but it's way better. I don't really like the concept of everyone reincarnating since from my hypothesis I feel every one might develop psychological issues from experiencing different lives countlessly.
i love it when she says babay babay , theres nothin in this world i wouldnt doo. i like it like that oh windows down chillin with radio on. baby baby baby oooohh. our love is like habituallll yeah. fresh prince of dick butt ehhh. candypaint with the white on top . randy dandy i love this novel got me singing some dumb****. really this is good real good.
After I finished the novel, I can say it was fun.
The world's background is good, and the power system is fairly good.
The biggest problem with the novel is the stupidity of most characters.
Characters with limited intelligence and stupid behavior.
The author should work more in terms of writing characters.
I think that's all I have.