A great story with an interesting beginning that somewhat provided a plausible explanation for the change in the world. An MC that has had to suffer and get through challenges and become better. I would love the release of new chapters to be faster as this is a captivating story with a great world build and character introduction and development. The translation needs to be brushed up but in light of how fabulous the story is it can be forgiven and overlooked.
dumb mc ✓ checkannoying mc ✓ checksimp mc ✓ checkmc is just retard doesn't even learn from his past mistakes , calls his system annoying , he has foolish pipe dream of become hero and make world in which every hero is good .drools over every girl .I think author delete bad reviews for maintaining rating. this story is utter garbage, waste of brain cell im sure if u hate dumb mc this story is seriously not for u .
read authors review and the comments then you'll fined out the reason, that's all i got to say . .
The best out of the novels each week. The plot of the lucky bags seems fairly overused, but the actual story's plot is actually really nice. The levels and power scaling feels similar to LotM, and the characters are interesting. The main character is also a normal person, which is nice. There's an overarching world background that has some mystery to it, which is why I enjoy this story.
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What I hate the most is the dense mc
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This one is called 'Heavenly Dao List' and is absolutely good novel and I really enjoyed reading it, u can read the raw novel on (Mtlnovels).
well written book and could be improved in a few places but overall a great novel. ... .... ., .. .. .. .. .. .. .
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This is a very generic story with little to none creativity above the standard. Characters have little development with new ones that wouldn't even need to exist in the story
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This is honestly my first time reading a webnovel, I've only read the first chapter before sleep but I'm already expecting alot from this
The only issue with it is the consistency, I've viewed the release date of every chapter and I understand if the author has some issues irl due to him not updating the novel but it just ticks me off.
Overall, for my first webnovel it's good.
mtl or raw link pls
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