The Magic of Arkonia

OK the story started with great quality but chapter by chapter the quality decrease from 44 upward its just plain and awful to read novels needs to stop the going to school cliche is killing most of them I don't even understand y he should go to school coz all the skills and beads are in the dimensions no offense I find the whole school premises dull. The author had a good Idea maybe it will b better but I doubt it I mean who in their right mind will remain in the same grade for 3years straight. That plot armor is all over the place infact I don't even understand what's going on. Verdict read this if u only have nothing better to do and the author is a huge nationalists.

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Is this a harem or nah?B——————————————->

A great premise building immediate tension in the early chapters with the 3 months. This story explores the mind space of someone with limited time. The use of punctuation and flow of sentences could be improved with time and more practice, but the characters that are integral to stories like this are all built up nicely in the early stages.There may be a sense of over-description at times, though it only provides more details into both the environment and the mental of the main character.Speaking of the main character, the vibrant yet lightly erratic thoughts and conversation with self is something I actually related to way too hard with.....

Very interesting looking forward to it