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I shall follow your advice senior
I've read All the chapters
That's what am wondering about too
I'm loving this story!!! Please update soon!!! And thank you for all the hard work you've all put in so far! It's been a great translation so far, so please don't let all that go to waste!!! Thank you!!
Interesting so far. when I saw there were only 9 reviews i wanted to be number 10 and unlock the ranking.
It's been a while since I've been spooked this much. This is definitely a great horror novel! While other horror stories tend to lose their scare factor after a few chapters, this one takes ahold of your interest and keeps you wrapped in that lingering sense of creepiness and fear. I stumbled upon this story at night and was rather chill about it at first. I mean, how scary can a webnovel be? Then I realized how foolish I was. Now, I can no longer sleep soundly. It's like I feel eyes staring at me as I slumber. If you are brave, give it a read as it is worth it. But please proceed with caution.
More than I expected. Pretty good imo. Give it a chance
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Nice it's okay I just like your bookearly to get excited but reading is the best
After the bitterness left in my mouth with the tybw's closing with too many question marks, this novel i is making me very hopeful. Narita I am finding him to be a skillful writer who is making me understand everything that is happening around our protagonists. Excellent that many persoanggi left to their fate in the manga are much more active, influential, and charismatic here. I hope the next volumes will have a similar or(welcome) higher quality.
Translation Quality - is readable, but not that great, there are times when i had to stop to think about what a paragraph meant, there are countless suggestions in the comments section but TL doesnt seem to look back to previous chapters so low rating from me.
Stability of Updates - is good and perfectly acceptable in terms of speed
Story Development - is great and im having a good time reading without too much of a complaint
Character Design - is above average and acceptable, nice friendly and funny characters, while also having some of the usual tropes youll often see in chinese novels
World Background - is great, set in good old earth with eastern fantasy elements added in, rated 4 stars because there aint enough details about the mystical side yet..
nice relaxing story to read, at the chapter im at the story has this slice of life vibe to it, while it is a generic story about a person getting a system and using it to improve his life and so on and so fort, as of now the mc is likeable and is prone to have a nice quite and peaceful life which is nice.
the story lay out is pretty much-got system>system issues quest>stuff happens>rewards>improve life>repeat.. but still nice cause most stories like this always have an arrogant/stupid mc that wants to get paid, laid and gatorade... the mc in here is a nice and chill dude that just wants a peaceful life and maybe get a nice family in the future(but knowing CN novels and because he has a system this aint going in that direction).
mystical elements are slowly being introduced, and also other characters seems to be shown to have some sort of knowledge of the occult. im already seeing where this is going, but as the way the author wrote to where i am at, i have some expectations.
i know that the TL is probably busy to look back at previous chapters cause he is providing chapters at a fast rate, but still irks me seeing confusing grammar, and mistakes. seeing the comments giving suggestions posted a long time ago being ignored is surely gonna affect newcomers.
Hey i was gonna give this a go after reading the synopsis. but the dig at meryl streep at the end made me not.
