For starters, it's just like the typical reincarnation story that everyone loves. The storyline is definitely enjoyable. Sentence construction, writing style, and choice of words are great. However, just like any typical reincarnation with a harem, it needs more uniqueness in it to be noticed. Good job with the plot twist as a Dragon God, though. Keep it up, author. Have fun!
Great story love it, need to improve the detail explanations but great till this point. The story keeps on improving at every chapters, update more frequently. Good luck and keep up the great job
It is noticed that the author has some experience with reading and does not describe the scenario with random words. In general, it seems well done for what I read.
Good luck!
I don’t get why the author would write such a good novel and ruin it with his personality. I mean 3 chapters straight about how the Americans are lazy and men being more skilled than women, i wish he would just say china is the best and get on with the story.
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