Awesome novel, Author!! Keep it up❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤???❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
i love fantasy and i am glad that this novel did great in the story telling with a captivating first chapter with its vividly described fantasy setting. dear author, although as you say it is your first book, it seems that you are already so good at attracting readers with your novel. best of luck and keep writing ?
The first 25 chapters are pretty good and the author did a good job when writing fighting scenes. -----------------------------------------------------------
It starts out alright, but honestly the main character is just incredibly stupid about everything. He never once seems to think about decisions that cause major world changing events past how it affects him and like 3 other people. He's told thing he can do are incredibly rare, even for people realms above him, and still seems shocked when they're called impossible or godlike. Insists on humans being the most important race, despite having all of his followers being magical beasts on different kinds. But not that one kind, they're evil. Starts a war with the only evil kind of beasts over 2 villages of common people, doesn't even consider that even more of his precious humans will die because of it because he think he'll get away with killing beasts whose master is one of the highest realms mentioned so far. The cultivation system is constantly on the back burner as the MC "learns" smithing techniques that he picks up because of the special fire he got.
Author here!This review is going to be different than my first review.talking about the ratings above,•the writing quality: maybe average at the start but even there I have tried my best to deliver every sentence in a way that will be understandable for my readers!• the story development: is slow but you won't find many holes unless you are urging for one...lol. And if you are thinking that, "Oh another cultivation novel where the mc is gonna be getting treasures left and right and his training will end in the blink of an eye" then you are half right and half wrong.Also from the name of the novel, some may think that the end is known, then you are very wrong.• character design: hehe my fav part....the character story for every character won't take place on the spot...(like hi I am wu shi from the shi clan and I am this, while my dad is that and my fiancee is bla bla bla), "nope
I don't know about other people but I can't really sit through and read although the stuff might be explained later. I just can't bear the fact that "Desire" knows things that are not supposed to be known by infants. Maybe this is supposed to be some reincarnation type but I'm dropping here. Bye
One of my four recommended read. Hopefully this passes through the trial read and go to the voting pool. Very irritating intro, since the start is about parents abandoning their children, so if you can get through that then everything is wonderful. MC will have a system that would also have a system space included where MC can train his cooking skills with time dilation included. Really hope that people can pass the intro to read this novel, since it's very interesting to read. This is definitely one of the top three in my four recommended read.
Mc is a looser...his father and brother keep taking money from him..his company gose under but mc keep giving them more...he want his father's acknowledgement so badly that story lost its charms.2/10
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Giving this a five star ratings for now, just because its not one of those poorly modified translated novels which totally killed the story.
his book was about a bird who didn't yet know how to fly.
The bird has to decide if it will try to fly, but it was not sure if it wants to. The bird thought, "If I never forever endeavor" then I won't ever learn. On one wing, he worries he might fail and on the other wing he thinks of how he may succeed. He worries that if he tries, he may get lost in the world. That makes him want to stay in his nest where he's safe.
I think this book would help other children to learn that trying new things can be scary, but sometimes when we try, we can find things that make us happy too. And this book will help others know that mistakes are okay and part of learning.
To sum it all up, I find the story very interesting, mostly because I haven't really happened upon this combination before. it's all very fresh and I am looking forward to new chapters.
this is a good book it's very UNDERATED and the characters development is very good. It might need better update schedule. :DDDDDDDDD :DDDDDDDD