One of the best novels I've ever read. The content is not cringey and I like how the main acts and overcomes the challenges especially the rewards.
it's the twice royal ships and jenlisa and chaesoo. not to mention seulrene too!
Bro made the book free?? Instant 5 stars and if I find any spelling error I will comment under them (ty for being a goat)
New here and this is this is recommended by a friend. Currently sitting by the window in a rainy weather with a laptop and reading this while taking hot tea just makes my day refreshing. Thanks for the chapters and do not change development style suddenly
Honestly, the author needs time skip here. cause I really don't enjoy cabrera and others building their guild. We don't need to know everything about guild making and side character's pov. MC needs more screen time cause he is the center of the novel, his character development, power development. What did he do with the loot and how he gonna use it, how he gonna train his 5 new subordinates(slaves). After, showing these points in the next few chapters, the author should time skip.
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the thing that rlly bothers me about this novel is the inconsistency in the story and how everyone and their mothers are so gung-ho about pk-ing that its just a major turn off from the story. Like how you would skip the parts about the mc dungeoning and the spend 4-7 chapters about him getting pk-ed or mc pk-ing.
the plot inconsistency is rlly bugging me out, like how you plotted out the story beforehand and then when u go to write it its nothing like the story you plotted out already, and more of just sitting down and improvising the whole thing. there was something i was rlly looking forward to later in the novel but all of a sudden getting that event pulled out from under my nose made me deduct major points from this novel.
and idk about anyone else but when i read a novel about a game i like seeing the numbers, equip stats, player stats, dmg numbers and stuff like that. but having it all suddenly disappear for like 70 chapters only to have it reappear for like 2-3 chapters rlly grinds my gears(200 something chapters as of this review)
most annying part is when u read the story it skips around and back like u forgot to mention something and just decided that all of a sudden it becomes canon. u cant be like "wow he just soloed a boss thats higher level than him" to all of a sudden "o hes not strong enough to take this boss on yet"
inconsistency is the key if that was fixed id totally be onboard to continue reading but for now its a no for me.
(** if this doesnt count as contructive criticism and gets deleted will be posting it multiple times till it doesnt)
So, here is your author here but I will not just give a shameless review here. I will tell you all the good and the bad points of this novel.
You can decide to read it or not after that.
The good points:
A calm MC: Lu Fei is mature, not brainless just because he's OP or something. He used to be a mercenary in a fantasy world, so he experienced the so called human nature there. He's not a guy who would blush talking to girls or hesitate to even insult them.
The game: Ark is going to be one of the highlights of the novel as the whole novel is mostly based on it. NPCs would just like be regular people and the interaction between them and Lu Fei would be one of the highlights of the novel.
Weak to strong: Lu Fei would not just become too OP from the start. He would struggle and even die sometimes but he would still be stronger than an average player.
Romance: It's one of the points I am confident you will like. It's going to be sweet, like really sweet. There would be more than one girl liking him but I can't say about the harem.
Characters: Characters would be unique and even some typical characters will have some unique points or a back story.
Chapters: The chapters will be 2k in length, which is above average in WN terms.
The bad points:
The start: The first ten chapters can get annoying to some people as there would be some info dump and the game part will only start on the 6th chapter.
Similar start: Many people will feel that the start is similar to other novels. A debt and a sister to take care of, but it will change as the story will progress.
Plot holes: There would be some plot holes in the novel. I can't do anything about it as every novel have it.
Not an OP MC: I know that VR novels in WN is filled with an OP MC who had come from the future and knows everything. This is bad point because most of the users look for an OP MC.
I can't think of more bad points and it's up to the readers to decide in the end.
I will advise the readers to read both bad and good reviews before reading the novel. Give a review, either positive or negative.
I don't think there would be any problems with the grammar unless one is a grammar Nazi. I will end my words here.
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Are you kidding me?! This is also dropped?! Webnovel, there is definitely something wrong with your trial read system! There couldn't be a more obvious example! Are your editors blind?! It's like throwing out the baby with the bath water!
IF for some reason, this doesn't get chosen, i am leaving this site forever.... this is what is needed now that LOHP is coming to an end....
well not much world background, not much depth in characters, only know he needs to gain immortality, well i think it'll improve in the future, good luck