Restarting Life In Another World

Great read loved it thank you keep going think you have a great story and plenty possibilities to explore like the Harem vibe that you are creating would be nice to see some that our MC opens his eyes onto all the subtle clues that they drop

Interesting concept for sure. Always good to see new fresh ideas! Excited to see where the story goes and how the main character will change and develop.

Oh, let's see, it's an anime like isekai novel. The reading feels like that the writer himself is an isekai anime fan. I liked the story but the characters design could have been better. Describe the characters more, (eg. what they are wearing). And also certain terms such as "miko" might not be familiar for non-japanese readers. So try to describe what they mean in the story. The concept looks very interesting to me, as an isekai can myself. Overall I pretty much liked the story. I hope you can keep your promise and release at least 1 chapter a week. Work hard.

Good story so far, character development slow but building nice and evenly, in my opinion, overall well done because i can see the scenes in my mind as i read them and i actually care what happens. Hope it continues.

I have made the writing as easy to understand and error-free as possible, but if there are any errors, you can let me know and I will fix it.
I will publish at least 3 chapters every week. I can publish more if I have more free time from work. I am a student + worker but I will do the best I can :)
The story development will be fast in the first volume since it is more focused on building the plot for the future story. But there will be steady development focusing on the world and the characters from the second volume. I know some people like a long descriptive start... But really, I think it would be too boring if the story without making much progress at the start.

The harem: Yes, the pieces are coming together.
The character background: No, even in a fantasy world everyone doesn't have a dark past, and 'I will create a revolution and change the country' like goal... Some may have such background though :P
Isekai: You may find it like every other isekai if you only read the first few chapters... There are twists in the later chapters.

I am a The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy fan so some reference may be used from there. (eg. the world is a program).... :D But there aren't many sci-fi elements here and No gaming elements.

I hope you enjoy the book. Even if you don't, thanks for giving it a try... You guys are awesome :)

So long and thanks for all the fish!!!

Underwhelming 'First Impression', the story telling in this novel is comes off as somewhat immature, naive and forced.

The side characters are just props that rarely show 'true' human emotions, shallow and without depth. Lackluster flow of dramatization, and many confusing contradiction that's made by the author him/herself. And all of that's just from reading the first few chapters.

Well, it's true that people said the key of making a good image, is good "First Impressions". This novel failed to intrigue me, apparently.