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So this was definitely an interesting story which can attract those who play these types of games such as myself and I enjoy how the author was able to capture the feeling like the odd one out around many other experienced players. Sadly, while the current story is very interesting, it is riddled with grammatical errors, bland descriptions, and a severe lack of emotions. There is much, and I mean much to be desired from the novel as it has a great plot but it isn't executed very well. Taking some time to re-read your chapters and rewrite them will definitely increase the popularity of your story. Writing isn't that easy, but I know you can improve!
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Well, it's pretty good..
That's all I have to say honestly..
I mean the pacings pretty off at times.. and sometimes the information dumb might be a turn off. But then again it's miles better than some of those dumb novels with the reincarnation stuff. So yeah, give it a read. Nothing new or innovating, but it does good with its premise, and who knows, you might just have a good time.
UpTo 100 chapter- it is good 101-200 chapter- medium200+ it is garbage?.............................................................................
Yo what is with the new wave of pilot reads they all look like they would make for some good stories--------------------------------------------------
i like the story, its pace is nice, character feels a bit iffy sometimes but its a very good read. The background plot progression always leaves room for a bit more mystrey and its quite funny and fun to read too
The story is def above average.I like the early romance that is in the making (though they might get separated soon so whatever).The power system and world setting is kinda well done, not sure if it's unique but feels fresh nonetheless.
Loved the story so far, loved the plot, the story maybe a little faster?..the author should probably explore more about the world background in the story and add more updates ?......sorry for grammar I'm bad in English
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Overall, it's a 5 star imo, the worldbuilding is nice and the first chapter sets a tone for the rest of the story, the characters are fleshed out and have their own personalities, the only problem I had was the grammar which can be easily fixed