Machine Translation, the grammar is awful.there is almost no use of "is" and is almost always "was" or "had".Past tense is all messed up.He, she also cannot be trusted because a machine cannot determine he or she through chinese and contextIt is an otherwise good story
Everything is good but story is very slow paced . starting was amazing snd by far one of my top story development but it is very slow !!,!Pls author fast pace the novel for revenge .
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My first Novel on this app.Not cringe, good plot but average writing skills. Maybe the writter is still learning at the beggining and will get better after a few chapters.
Cultivation + Modern Setting, something rare, done more than just well.
No comments regarding grammar, with an anti hero MC that actually has common sense. Worth the time spent reading.
If you don't like reading broken English, do yourself a favor and skip this.
I tortured myself for 30 chapters before jumping ahead and checking if it would eventually get better. It doesn't.
Shame really. With editing I think it would be a good read.
Probably the worst one of its kind , atleast in other of these the mc is super op or makes use of the system, in this the system barely comes up after the initial chapter this story doesn't have anything good about it
I like it. That is all I have to say. Because I haven't finished it reading, I never knew of the character development since I didnt stay long. But I love the setting.
Great and funny story There are farming stories there are dungeon master stories but this 2 in 1 package is what we need and deserve Do keep it up and do continue to update chapters regularly !!!
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not good english,but i can see you have tried to writing a story,try more hard.i belive you can do better next time.
the story need more patients to read.
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