I like this novel, the start was a type of clinch everyone likes! This novel has great potential. i hope it had more chapters! we need more chapters!!
It doesn't make sense that the MC is the heir of the duke family but is insulted like an ordinary person or a low-rankingnoble. And it doesn't matter if his family can't use magic because they should have their own people. The supervisorshouldn't have that kind of power.But the rest of the storyline is very good.PS.The characters are a little too young.(English is not my primary language.)
Let's talk about mc's personality. If you guys can bear it read it. MC is like a child. When he doesn’t have a candy, he will stay silent and pretend that he doesn’t like candy at all. When he gets a candy he will show it around to everyone. look i have a candy but it doesn’t matter to me. He show's that he's low key and modest. People around him praises him such. But how can you be low key when everyone and there grandma knows who you are.If you can bear this or you’ve nothing to read, you can give it a try.
he can edit but he only did it 4 times he still can edit about 5 more times then he made himself with much potential yet he always goes after other's opportunities that make his talent pointless as if it's only an excuse for the auther to make him powerful cultivation system is messed up, every time he talk about strength he must make feel wrong for example at 7th level divine sea realm he can fight an illumination realm powerhouse yet when on 1sr illumination realm he can only fight a 3rd level one so author wasted the entire world background like that he wasted 2 edit opportunities makeing an elixir work on an cultivation less than it supposedly be taken for example blood cloud powder that can increase cultivation speed by 10 times but can only be take by divine sea realm or above huh when you edit it it becomes can be take by any realm Remember editing must be logical there's no logic here since a strong medicine can brust with much energy for low levels one's to absorb now then instead of editing elixir data why not find a source to get resources ?? why not try to create opportunities that's much better than stealing other's in which you could use these people as followers thus building a power for himself ??
Not bad, actually pretty good. Though it gets slight convoluted later on, its still miles better than other novels. The word building and characters are great.
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i all about romance but I decided to give this book a chance. Okay, what got my attention was the book cover and I proceeded to the synopsis and I told myself. I must read this. Sincerely, the book didn't disappoint me which excite me a lot. A great piece of work and looking forward to more chapters!
Love your work just bought all 890 chapters keep up the good ?
Alright! Here’s my honest review on this story:In the first chapter, the spacing of the paragraphs sentences was horrible. But this gets fixed almost immediately in the chapters after that and I suprisingly didn’t see any flaws after that initial first chapter.I can say the characters seem interesting along with believable interactions in most scenes. Some people might believe the characters to be stupid, but they are just teenagers in the story at the moment. So them being stupid is very normal. Especially in the beginning.Currently, when writing this review, there is only 6 chapters released. Because of that, I haven’t seen enough of the story to know if there’s proper pacing or story development.Also, there needs to be more regular updates. At least for the first 20-30 chapters.This is the end of my honest review.
Except translation quality there's nothing worth reading in this trash novel. Specially the mc personality
One of my favoirite books of all tome. Aaron is such a unique character and the author crafted him so well. This is also a psychological genre that'll take you write into our protagonist's head. It's just so authentic. He is in a dark pit of despair, but can he find his light? Find out by clicking that READ!!?
This is one of best Novel.it's well written and storyline is amazing.it's currently one of most popular Novel in china.I suggest you guys read it.MC is likable, World background is amazing,side character good too.