Its.... something. I cant say the novel is horrible, but in several instances the writing quality and ideas behind it leave a lot to be desired. Theres a lot of forced interactions and "humor" that seems like the author is trying to inject into the story, but to me at least it comes off a little forced. The author tries to make the system a mix between helpful and controlling, which ends up feeling weird because its hard to tell if its actually trying to assist the MC, just mess with his life, or force him to follow its agenda. Supposedly, some people came to this novel in promise of romance or sex scenes or whatever, but if thats the case i suggest you look elsewhere as the author skirts around those. Admittedly, im not up to the current chapters so some of these problems may have been fixed later on, but up to chapter 50 at least you'll definitely see many of these issues.
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
the start is not that good and the way that knowledge is so hard to get gives supreme magus vibes. The concept of magic in this world is weird in the sense that authorities are governing certain aspects of reality and the magus is only offering raw magic. Nevertheless the infusion of true meaning in specialities makes the novel system that much intriguing. Its fair to say this novel is snowballing in a sense that it only gets better and the writing quality in it self is top notch. I super recomend this and my only time being truly bored was the flashback monotous and extended experience that Evin had while sorting out his memories to the former authority
Obligatory five star review by a shameless author, this is the first time I am writing something without any magic, super powers and systems. I just hope that it doesn't fall flat because I kind of enjoy writing it.
TL;DR - This novel is a great read for anyone who likes reading about apocalypse and how the survivors fight for their own visions. In a world where right and wrong doesn't exist anymore, only strength is true justice. That is a concept I am quite intrigued by, and this novel did a great job bringing that out.Now then, a little more detailed.Writing Quality - grammatical and spelling mistakes are minimal. There are quite a few formatting/punctuation errors during dialogue, but that can all be overlooked and resolved with a little bit of proofreading. In fact, many readers may not notice these tiny mistakes at all.Stability of Updates - not many chapters so far, so this is pretty hard to say at this point in time. But currently from what I can see it's been 1 chapter/day, pretty consistent.Character Design - each character has their own personality and specialties. The uniqueness and diversity between characters is something I, along with other readers, can appreciate.World Background - the author did a great job setting the stage for this novel, while keeping an aura of suspense regarding the Crimson Calamity. I am excited to learn more about who - or what - caused this disaster.Overall, I recommend this book to any readers out there. Whether you like apocalypse or not, this book is a fine twist on the classics. You won't regret reading this.