I just started reading this a bit ago and I've already finished it all and I just wanna say that this is a really good book so pls don't drop author. I've seen good novels like this but they end up getting dropped in the end which really sucks, so keep up the hard work author I love this book!
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Great Idea but too many ascenin things the priotities of the mc are all over thje place and he is supposed to a survivalist. so much potential but not maximized not a bad read tho
My reaction is, Meh. The writing is bland. The author constantly contradicts himself. Some of the stuff makes no sense. 2.5/5. It doesn't make me feel immersed to the story...
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you should read 5 chapters and tell me how many brain cells yall lost as well. Iost so many brain cells that i could barely register simple words. So many useless information were presented so many useless opinions were presented. So many useless things were presented.
Chandu is a good writer and this novel proves that. Not only is the story development done perfectly but the MC makes the LN more realistic and better. BTW this was Dragonim.
Well here's what I think •Its cool and slow paced Totally not for you if you want blood every 3 paras•Its soothing and refreshing, more than the plot or actual story the authors writing style attracts me more•The author is pretty descriptive,and each chapter is aslo lengthy, so if you also like to indulge in details of small small things,Go ahead read it•Minimum Plot holes , like its totally relatable, not like a random person at the bottom of society gets to the top of the world in 3 steps•MOST IMPORTANT: The story is In SYNC,The character background correctly influences his decisions,The world background also affects him nicely , like he knows even with future knowledge he cant become ruler of world.•Another point which I personally like about M.C is that he also doesn't like violence, so if you aslo dont like violence then you will like and understand him pretty well.☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆My advice: Dont Binge it.Read it slowly and lavish every chapter cause trust me it's worth it.☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆
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In short, this novel follows a in the beginning mostly average person in his adventure into the VR-game A New World (ANW). The story includes several deep topics, from AI over what is life to psychological topics. It also has a slow progress in the overarching story progression. Many different things happen and there is a good mix of action, adventure and training both in-game and out-of-game with an in-depth magic system. The MC does really not get any rest.––– detailed with mild spoilers –––Writing Quality: Some minor errors which do not hamper comprehension. Action scenes are exciting and even the complex topics are understandable (if you do not rush read through the chapters).Story Development: The MC and the whole story makes slow but constant progress, which I find a much more realistic flow for a VR Novel. There was only one big timeskip in about 500 chapters, but I did not miss any. Where would they come from? Games are designed to be exciting and the MC does more than what the average player would. This novel also developes the real life story, which is rare. Real life does not stop just because there is an in-game event and it is the same the other way arround.The different encounters and events/quest are always exciting and the whole feel of the VR-Game which is too real for what a game is supposed to be is integrated well. New storylines are always introduced in a sensible way and up till now none of them were abandoned.Character Design: All characters have depth to them but backgrounds are not just dumped on the reader and thus only told, when a character asks or feels the need to give info. This means, that the reader has to think about how characters act and interact to get a comprehensive picture of the characters.Update Stability: Very good. One to two chapters a day with even length. Small pauses only when significant problems occur. Direct reader interaction from small backlog.World Background: The most realistic VR novel I have seen. Both real life and the game world are resonable and thought out. Cool and interesting magic system which does require thinking by the reader and rereading of past chapters after long pauses in reading.Compared to go "Mages are too op": Magic system keeps this detailed description which was only present in the early chapters of MATO. 500 chapters in this novel might be about at 100 chapters of MATO by developement of MC.
I think I have to give five stars at everything since it only has one chapter for now. Although the chapter dumped a few information about the reader's needs, it was still an entertaining read! kudos for the author!