personally the pacing to the story is a bit wrong as well as the mc and his powers and stuff just don't seem to mesh well with everything I believe that the story just doesn't flow together correctly but I do believe that should it go through a rewrite with a proofreader to help get the flow on track it will be wonderful
The story is good, although there may be some grammar mistakes, the story progression is good and the story is thrilling. Overall a good book.
Hello , story is grate but u need to put space`s when someone is talking a litle bit of editing should help ur story alot. And tbh ur idea is grate i like it alot its a fresh new contest for me at least. i need more chapters so i can rate it 5 star but for now its a solid 4. Just edit ur chapters better and everything will be fine.
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Woah! That's a lot of chapters! What's your ave word count? I'm giving this a little boost because among the books that I've reviewed today, this one's really easy to the eyes, if you know what i mean
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Translator use chapter repeat to «farm» blatantly credits, too bad the story seemed interesting... I desabonned. Seems to happen a lot nowaday, hope the site do something about it... Report button maybe ?
first off I love the idea because it's actually really cool. and in fact I also think this would be great with just a single addition. it needs an editor. the novel is rife with grammar and syntax errors to the point where it's actually distracting. on top of that there's quite a few places you can tell we're the result of a finger slipping while typing numbers.
This novel is great and I can't believe I did not find it sooner. A way I appraise an author's ability to write is their way of showcasing characters. The author did not write a character for the sake of the story rather the story is molded by the personalities of characters. The world so far is phenomenal. The grammar is well done. The mention of stats and abilities is not over the top. The characters are alive and kicking both in body and brain.Characters actions aren't described in an overly condescending manner which results in a compact and complex read. The protagonist is written as a schemer which is rarely done as well as this.The plot is written to allow many more chapters to come so do not expect the end to come anytime soon.Overall this is one of the best reads ive had in the site. I will be following the author's works in the future. Honestly this novel deserves the title 'god of mischief' which is mistakenly used by another author.
Though this novel has small no. of chapters, I already like it.Author give us more chapters. .
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