九龙法师

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It is a decently good novel but the system that gets the mc to act like a five year old at all times and if it weren’t for plot armor he would be dead in no time makes this novel not for me

I couldn't even start to read this to even rank it. too many additional characters makes it painful to try. clean it up please so that many people will be able to enjoy it if it is a good story

first off I love the idea because it's actually really cool. and in fact I also think this would be great with just a single addition. it needs an editor. the novel is rife with grammar and syntax errors to the point where it's actually distracting. on top of that there's quite a few places you can tell we're the result of a finger slipping while typing numbers.

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Great job. Your story is going on interesting. Please update daily. Good luck.Need more chapters. Overall awesome thought process. All the best.