keep updating or are you on hiatus because I dont want that, please let us read new chap. u could get PS if u update please please
what happen to the updates im waiting for 18 days now ans its still didnt update why explain yourself is it because you are focusing on another novel or are you sick?
Best story I've ever read on this app. An actual realistic ish main character, who doesn't through the magic of a system turn into michael jordan in his rookie year. The main character, Hector actually fails and learns which is refreshing.
Amazing! Another story from my most favourite author. It even started well this time. The start for this story is totally amazing.
I like the synopsis too. It's simple and short.
I am looking forward to more releases.
I absolutely adore this captivating mystery with the perfect amount of drama. The main character is so witty and it really adds to the overall enjoyment of the story. It's a great read and I highly recommend it!
He has an amazing approach to mysteries that is truly remarkable. I am in awe of his ability to take on such complex cases and come up with creative solutions. His dedication and enthusiasm for solving puzzles is truly inspiring, and I can't help but be impressed by his skill. It's no wonder he has become so successful in his career!
Caution!
I've made a mistake and there is a lot of info dump in the early chapters. Although I cannot guarantee it, I am doing my best not to repeat this in the future.
This story revolves on the Main Character Nile who transmigrated in the world full of zombie. I will focus on him and his development.
As a newbie author, I know I will make a lot mistakes during this journey. I apologize in advance for that.
I am open for critics(no harsh words please), that way I know where I am lacking and what should I improve more.
If you have any suggestions and tips to improve my writing, please do tell me about it.
One star all across the board, except for the translation i guess, you'd think with a preview that this trash novel wouldn't get picked over the other contenders.
Not much to say, not much suspense, cringe dialogue, the main character does't seem to have a personality outside of whatever chuuni dialogue the author wants him to spew.
Very much unlike how some characters from other stories are driven by reason and their own logic. I've read how some stoic main leads who were men of few words, who perhaps justity their lack of action through an internal dialogue, perhaps adopting a darwinian view of the world as a necessay rite of passage for the transition of the new world.
What about this MC? Well his explanation is that its becuase they're worms and being good niave cuz bad can save u unlike being good and thats not good and hes right and no question him he has super SSS skill but his class also op and im losing precious braincells and time writing this garbage.
Why did that read terrible, and very lacking in thought? That's kind of how this story reads and feels, things just happen and the stats brought up dont really mean anything. So my advice is to just avoid this altogether unless you like actively losing braincells.
I was enjoying the book until chapter 45. Then the author took a weird turn by adding 'advanced' guns to the story. I get that time has passed and technology has advanced but dude you ruined the story by adding that.
Too many things keep popping up, no solution, currently on ch42, just transmigrated AGAIN,I don't even know if I want to read this when he just moved to a whole different fake world, sigh.
the author of COBI (Castle of the Black Iron) and Silver Overlord has a strong patriotism when it comes to his country (based on the 2 previous novel that i read of his) so expect the Hua (china) is a great country / the most powerful nation / powerful soldier and advance technology thingy. His novel is catered more on Chinese rather than international readers but if you liked COBI and Silver Overlord this will be probably also appeal to you
Story and character development is going in good direction and hopes if goes on like that. Harem member are also good and hope they get enough screen time unlike other novel where they get separated for 200 to 300 chapters.
Your novel has good things author. The style is fast-paced and straightforward, something really good in action scenes. It feels like a modern work, both in setting and as a literary work. Good job.
However, sometimes it reads more like a journal, while others more like a short story. This inconsistency can make it sometimes a little tiresome and tedious to read. Try to stick more to one style. There are also some grammar mistakes like mixing grammatical tenses and missing plurals, but nothing that makes the story unreadable.
Some few fixes and you're good to go. Keep working on it!