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One of my favourite wish fulfilment novels..
This novel is solid. If you want a solid novel you’ve found it. The glaring issue is two things the pace which is moving fast, that’s okay for now, but the chapter length is too short. It’s 1/3 the length of a regular chapter so keep that in mind.
Alright, let's do this according to the rubric Qidian assigns:
Translation Quality/Stability of Updates: Neither can be properly verified given it's in Trial Read, so I just put that at 3 - the average.
Story Development: It's basically about the same as one of this author's earlier novels, The Strongest System, so it gets no points from me on that - copy/pasting isn't exactly hard. Even disregarding that, however ... it seems like it doesn't quite know what to do with itself. Main character wants to escape? Wait, let's not. Even with what it *does* do, it's not like the story development so far is refreshing or interesting - it's formulaic, something you can find in basically any Xianxia of note.
Character Design: It's Lin Fang. Across all the author's works, he's basically the same, and a quintessential non-character all the time. This isn't a character prone to depth or anything, he's just a tool for comedic hijinks and random 'moments of awesome' that have so far been something of a nothingburger considering the very premise of this story (along with some forced emotional moments that just made me roll my eyes, again because of the story premise - I guess they were played for humor, because of it? Didn't really appeal). The other characters aren't any better - they fulfill the stereotypes of the MC's buddies, his enemies are made out to be the scum of the earth, everything the MC does is to showcase his power and intelligence - you know the drill.
World Background: Basically non-existent so far. It's a Xianxia world with sects, following the Xianxia tropes. Not exactly deep, yo.
Mind, this is basically a cookie-cutter 'shameless protagonist Xianxia', so if that's what you like, then this is for you. It just does nothing interesting with it, or even explores the characters, situations or environment - what you go in this expecting, you get, so in that sense this might even be considered sensible of the author - churn out populist stuff that pleases the niche Xianxia audience, and hey, you get oodles of cash with little need for thinking deeply. Works like a charm.
Underrated novel. Definitely deserves more popularity than most of the novels here. Highly recommend reading this to everyone. Trust me it’s worth it
So far good bro!
Modern Timeline, have system, cultivator, martial art, romance or maybe you wanna go harem?
Remind me Returning from the immortal world, but far from it cause mc got no system and the ending kinda suck there
I just hope you dont end up like all mainstream ff.
And add more comedy or something like face slapping?
Keep it up, give us more chap please lol
I must say that this is one of my fav genre; Transmigration, modern (earth civilization), snowbiz (not yet shown, but I hope so). So yeah, it's sad when seeing this review section because just 1 guy reviewed it before I do.
Maybe a little bias because it is literally just expressing my liking to the genre, but who cares. Anyway it's still early to tell the tales, so I can't say much of it.
I found this by luck..why the **** do all the authors that write the good FF's hide this ****......... honestly I found this by luck....put it in FF.........also whats up with the new chp?..it confusing..................................in case anyone misunderstands the one star is cause the author didnt put it in FF...
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While the vast majority of novels begin with an ***** protagonist, this novel delights us with something not so much seen. The protagonist begins as a newborn baby who was barely able to receive any affection from his mother before losing her, only to receive cold and contempt from his father. As the chapters progress, the story catches up with you more and more.I definitely recommend it.
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