For one, this isn't actually a romance novel. Instead this novel is completely serious mystery-thriller/horror genre. Which is brilliant really. Doubly so when the system's main function is one of those revive systems (loading into previous save point.)
However the characterisation of the protagonist is unreasonable. So unreasonable that it's just down-right annoying. The author has the protagonist become better (in mental capacity, critical thinking, and power) by 1% every time he dies. So even after 8 deaths the protagonist doesn't really change much. Sure the author describes that he has changed (using terms like mental plasticity), but in reality? He doesn't. Worse, the improvements are maybe evident for one chapter, with the protagonist himself bashing his own naivety, and then...? He regresses into an idiot again. He repeats the same mistakes. He plays the hero to the same consequences. This protagonist is a marvel of poor characterisation.
great story, love the idea of putting the readers comments and gifts into the story, I hope romeru updates this story soon, really loved lil zombie and I want to see him become the undead king that he was always meant to be
This review contain a spoiler so be alert...
but before that, I know we all have different taste on what we love to read so I hope you respect my opinion GAHAHHAHAHA, did I look like respecful and honorable? Anyway enough of that, I can only say that this novel was so over Underrated!
WRITING QUALITY - I really can't give the best answer on this as I know that my writing quality compared to Evil_Dragon (The author) was so very inferior. But I was serious to give it a Complete star! Maybe in early chapters it have some little mistake (I think) but if I can understand it, I know you all can do the same. In terms of writing quality, If I compare all the webnovels I reads, this one was surely in my top 10.
STORY DEVELOPMENT - This was the highlight!! The story was so awesome that you will skip sleeping! though I know that we all habitually do it everyday, but I swear that you will have a valid reason why you skip sleeping if you read this. One of the part I like on this story was the scheming and planning the Mc made, but beside his great talent on it, there is still some opponent that can hinder his plan and even change it. This was also the reason what make it interesting, A tough opponent make the story more amazing, Though his plan fail, he was not discourage. It even help his character development! The only problem I have is that It gave more pov time to some new character that popped up in the latter chapter that in every 10 chapter it only give mc a little bit pov, though it needed to develop the character I still got bored on it, still I continue to read cause I know that there will be more interesting in the future.
CHARACTER DESIGN - The character design was also good, especially to women GAHHAHAHHHA I loved it!!!
UPDATING STABILITY - well I don't have a difinite answer on this as I only started reading this yesterday so find it on your own GHAHAHHAHA by the way I already caught on the latest chapter, so I really don't know the upadate stability GHAHAHHAHA
WORLD BACKGROUND - GAHAHHAHA this one was also good, in the latest chapter there is only 2 country that have been really describe while the other one was still on going while the last was only mentioned. Though there is still many more country or they called here in this novels kingdom, empire or some any name GAHHAHHA The thing I like on these two kingdoms was they have different culture, the one kingdom called their school academy while the other one sect, so I'm even more curios the others GAHHAHHAHAH
LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST.
- I love the way the mc handles his woman, and there is always a reason behind that. Though he really don't engage them in romantic way, he still engage them in physical and also he was not the one who take initiative.
There is two type of how mc only interact with women.
1. HIS LIFE AND THE BENEFITS
2. LOYALTY AND BENEFITS
I don't want to give any spoilers, so if you want to know, read this novel immediately and I promised to all of you that you will not be dissapointed.
CORRECT ME AUTHOR IF I HAVE A MISTAKE IN DESCRIBING GAHHAHAHHAH
The first couple of chapters are horrendously translated. It gets better later on but it’s still not great. Also the story isn’t consistent.
One chapter he upgrades an artifact from 1 minute of usage to 100 minutes. A few chapters later it’s back to 1 minute. In another chapter it states a beast is a mid gold tier. In the next paragraph it says early gold tier.
Also, at this point im confused on a lot of things. Is the only thing that has matters is how high of a quality a pet is? How do pets get stronger? Can a lower quality pet with a higher grade defeat a higher quality one? Not much is really explained for most things; it’s very vague.
Overall it’s fine if you just skim through it without thinking too much. As long as you ignore the plot holes and sub-par translation you could read this as a way to pass time.
Though I had read only a few chapters but they are enough to hook me up.
World Background- The world setting is really Exhilirating. I liked the way author gave a detailed info about everything.
character setting- Characters are good. it's not hard to relate and understand their views, which I found good because it helped me to connect to the story.
plot setting- The plot seems to be revolving around the royal and castle things, which is a nice one. I liked the plot setting.
The only thing which somehow poked is there are way too long paragraphs and dialogue are incorporated into it. which somehow becomes boring to read for a longer times. and also the explanation is quite much. Rest all the things I loved about it.
keep it up author, written in a good way.
The book ends at chapter 337, but is dropped, not completed. It was a waste of time reading, and webnovel should have the status say dropped instead of completed. Thankfully, it is easy to find these novels elsewhere so I will never have to pay for an unfinished novel labeled completed again.
The premise is the MC has reached level 99 so he already has a bonus. Then he gets another bonus in exchange for murder. Sometimes it seems that no author on qidian had a pleasant childhood.
Finally something different from the usual system overflow we have been having for a while now. Let's hope the synopsis is accurate.
The princess's personality seems full of potential. The element of mystery is strong around the story setting. The most addictive thing is the prospects of dragon and pheonix interaction....can't wait to see how the things would be developing further.
Is this a fanfic? Why are all the chapters locked?
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all the chapters after 78 are just random letters and symbols and bits and pieces of previous chapters. not sure if my mobile app is messed up or if the author is just posting random things. prior to chapter 79 i would have given this novel 4 amd 5 stars but now i have to give it 1 stars sincr i just purchased about 30 chapters of no content.