RREN: Alternate 2020

Hi! This is the author here~ So, I hope you are all enjoying the novel I am writing here, and please do give me a review (you can criticise) so that I know what I should improve upon! Thanks to those who have already given me a review!

Anyways, I will try to keep a consistent update but with university studies, health and other matters, I might be delayed or put on hiatus during tests or exams (sorry (ಥ﹏ಥ)!).

Lastly, please help me come up with character names! I'm not that creative and I can't seem to come up with good names that reflect upon the characters ( ﾟヮﾟ)  You can comment them down in the 'chapter comments' section and I will read them all!

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Thanks for reading!
Bunny

The first time l saw this book, l thought it'd be the ordinary "virus" books buh oh boy was l wrong. The author not only showed me she has talent buh passion as well...l jhus gat hooked from the first chapter and zinged. So to u who's reading this ryt now....honey buckle up and come join the ride & trust me when l say u won't regret it!

Nice...
this book is good and I really love the theme, synopsis made be feel like an idiot bcoz  of this sentence
who am I?
I'm Ray
no matter what I couldn't stop smiling looking at it. (I just felt it funny)

It was quite good! Some of the scenes are quite realistic and the description is good. The plot in itself was quite interesting!
Keep writing and best of luck!

A very novel approach for the narration of the story, it takes a bit more time from the reader to get into this alternate world but once in you would get hooked. Keep up the good work author.

Your novel has good things author. The style is fast-paced and straightforward, something really good in action scenes. It feels like a modern work, both in setting and as a literary work. Good job.

However, sometimes it reads more like a journal, while others more like a short story. This inconsistency can make it sometimes a little tiresome and tedious to read. Try to stick more to one style. There are also some grammar mistakes like mixing grammatical tenses and missing plurals, but nothing that makes the story unreadable.

Some few fixes and you're good to go. Keep working on it!