I Reject Quests

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This isn't a review of me praising my work. This is a sort of disclaimer in case readers don't get suddenly disappointed.

1. The MC - Don't try to understand him. Because he has many dynamics to him, it would mislead the readers into thinking that he is 'THAT type of character' when he isn't. His attitude on certain points would also be questioned. Sometimes, he would act out of character. It has been explicitly stated that the story is aware of it. In time, the questions would be answered.

2. Plot too weird and random - As a beginner author, there are scene jumps in the beginning but it would disappear some chapters later. There would be some random events but they aren't closely related to the main plot.

3. Atmosphere - 80% of the second volume is gloomy, not dark. Don't get the wrong impression from the beginning and the synopsis.

4. Pacing - Events happen one after another. But I wouldn't call it fast as if the time is considered, it is slow. The MC doesn't get the time to breathe.

This is my response to the well-deserved criticisms. If there are any questions, you can comment. I usually respond to the comments.

Not a shameless author here. It's probably very early for a review but since I have nothing to do, I might as well write this. Also, I want to make things clear. If you go into "see who voted" and see my profile, understand that it's not that I'm shameless. I was scrolling down my novel page in admiration for my work when a guy voted, I got too excited and pressed the "vote". I know it's a minor issue but still.

Coming to the novel, I like to think that it's flawless but as an author as well as a reader I know it's not. The writing being one of the biggest flaws (which I'm trying to improve). Regarding the world-building, I believe it's more or less okay. If it appears bad, then it can only be attributed my not-okay writing. Understanding reader's dissatisfaction with main characters, I made the MC. He isn't a Gary Stu but he will get the job done. There are several social norms I would talk about in a sarcastic way.  They are not to be taken seriously. Everything else is subjective. You like it? Good. You don't like it? Not good but I understand.

This Novel Deserve a Good Rating. I don't how i get here but once i started reading it got me hooked. Already completed all available Chapters.it is  One of the best novel out there but idk why it's not in the Ranking. Its a True hidden gem.

Too many things keep popping up, no solution, currently on ch42, just transmigrated AGAIN,I don't even know if I want to read this when he just moved to a whole different fake world, sigh.

The story is not bad, but it has a ton of sudden jumps with no context. He transmigrates to another world (this is fine so far), he plays a video game once or twice (which I have a hard time finding why he got it in the first place, he may or may not be blacksmithing- I cannot really tell. He meets 15 different people and I still don't know who is who half the time. It does not really clarify what his systems are a whole lot

RECCOMENDED! READ THIS!!!






i don't know man..... slow and confusing are the words and oh... I read the first 10 chapters and jumped to the latest, the story progressed by 3%