Whoa!!
I really find this book interesting..
I hope for more!!
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more.
Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
The story is great but the updating is slow which is what I am worried will stop and abandon the book
This book is unique and does not copy or put the anime background which is great I have yet to see a book that does this theme right I hope you translate and update the book because I would pay for it.
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So i felt like reading some isekai and stumbled upon this...
My rating overall is about 3.8
The writing quality i wont comment on because it feels okay to me and even if there are mistakes i don't think it's a big deal either way.
Story-wise there isn't anything too far from what we have seen in these kind of stories but personally i dislike the MC. So this is where my rant to the author starts.
He just seems completely strange to me...like TOO POLITE for one, i mean i get it everyone has manners and such but this guy just feels over the top for me, sometimes a few of his thoughts he keeps to himself would have been better said out loud to help develop the story along with his character..
Speaking of which his interaction with women, it's obvious this is a harem route but why does this MC lack so much backbone? Even the slightest of touches from the teasing Dog Girl has him flustered like he has never interacted with women his entire life mind you this should be someone that is at least around 17-20 years old since he is doing job hunting in his previous life. I'll just assume the author is doing it for comedy i guess...
Last but not least does this guy think for himself? I mean i get it at the start where he was just learning and all that but for someone that comes from our world with all these anime and movies you're telling me this guy never once thought about experimenting with his magic? Someone had to tell him to try fusing for him to do it? He summoned familiar's that seem to be thousand of years old but never considered asking them for advice on magic from their experience?
This guy just feels like a clueless side character most times that hold up a sign that say "I'm the MC" every now and then. Also author you should flesh out his harem some more because even reading this over the few days sometimes i'm barely remembering who is who, then again i assume you were probably waiting for later to have some 'special moments' with the MC to flesh them out some more.
Either way i'm still following along...this is just my thoughts good luck on the story.
Hurm.. Another great idea yet bad plot. Mc is quite weird in using his cheat. He should be using it for like, his core. His foundation. But he didn't. And not only that, you can see that this novel follow the trend of meme and troll sh1t that is so much nowaday... Well, a read that would need you to sacrifice your brain cell.
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Overall this is a very enjoyable story, well written besides an error here or there, but those are ignorable, with a very interesting main character who becomes more likable over time, some interesting love interest, and a dash of mystery that’s fun to think about. I think this is a story you should definitely give a try, you might have fun with it to be sure, but make sure to read the auxiliary chapter to avoid any momentary confusion.