The writing quality of this story was really good however as a reader I feel frustrated due to the fact that it doesn't have a proper ending. There is no closure to any of the characters the author has just abruptly ended the story. For heaven sake the main character in the beginning of the story keeps hinting that he will branch out from the music industry to the film industry and so on, but that does not happen, forget that atlest end the story in such a manner that he reached the peak of the music industry. The character development is really bad. It is such a pity that the author left the readers hanging after introducing so many interesting plots.
What happens to Liu Yan and Zhao Zilin, what happens to Liang Feng and his grandfather, to Cao Feifei and her family the author ha snot written a conclusion to even a single character in the novel.
As a personal note I would like to say that it was initially a extremely well written book and I had such high hopes for the book. I guess greater the expectation greater the disappointment.
Nice synopsis dear Author... it's quite simple yet so captivating. We all as writers have our own writing styles and techniques that can hook our readers yeah
Gonna be shameless and leave a review for this masterpiece. Maybe not really a masterpiece but do give it a read and hopefully you all will enjoy it ,
Han Xiao would like some of that luck of yours.
I'm really enjoying the story so far! The plot is intriguing, and the story is well written. The author updates very frequently, you can tell how passionate they are about writing, and how much effort they put in. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Honestly seems like another absolute great teacher novel. So if you like absolute great teacher you’ll probably like this. /&&/&/&/&/&/&//&&/&/&/
Other than the really bad dog abuse, (basically buying dogs to use for dungeon boss baiting, yes, exactly like bear baiting). Which MC does once, and there are hints that he may one day be punished by the system or the gods. But OTHER than that, it's a fairly well crafted tale of a guy whose weird, missing uncle with all the crazy adventure stories, suddenly sends him a PC tower connected to a multi-universe dungeon instance creation system. Being a hacked in version he doesn't get exp, but he does get to loot. So yeah, pretty good, besides the stuff with the dogs, which I hate but realize much of the world regards dogs as tools and not family members(and no dog hotpot has been mentioned in this one, so there is that)
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Author,The rest of the chapter is good.But After that chapter when Betty kissed Andrea,it gave a bad taste to me(Light NTR).Even though it aint being done with a Man. I Hope that kind of thing aint happening anymore in the upcoming chapter.
Is there going to be chapters added to this novel as it is in trial read or is it going to stay at 0 chapters for a while? While the Heavens are not the same time for the rest of the devil in the raws it???
A great sports novel that mixes system elements with realism. The main character isn't the only person you find yourself rooting for. the side characters are all likeable and multidimensional. There isn't people trying to suppress the main character for no reason like in a lot of system novels(yet). The author introduces unique problems to challenge the MC while still making him strong. Only downside about the novel is that chapters aren't released very fast.
Great stuff. What I can say5 STAR FOR EFFORT AND ALL BOOK STORY. GOOD STUFF READ PLEASEFULL SUPPORTMAKE MORE AND MORE BOOK LIKE THIS..HI AUTHOR BEST OF LUCK