my honest review of this novel is that it has a lot of potential i came in thinking it was just gonna be a novel with 18 plus scenes every chapter but it isnt the beginning was the best part so far it started out slow and got into the power levels and different abilities and how the stats work which is very unique but i feel like the quality dropped when he came out the dungeon the author throws new enemies at us outta nowhere the power system seems all messed up like he can freeze the concept of levels how is that even possible i understand freezing time or space but levels and stats is absurd i think his eye is very underused he it can literally allow him to read minds and view their people lives so he should know there weaknesses and their fighting patterns yet he dosent do that and 1 of his lovers gets a "weaker" version of his time stop that allows her to be immortal to anyone but him and i dont like how the author throws enemies that are continental and have conceptual abilities at the palm of their hand at the mc i think author should just rewrite the whole novel as it has alot of potential just go slower dont make him automatically planetary and have the ability to fight beings millions of years older than him in 2 days worth of time
in the disciple accepting system novels group this one js among the bottom tier(the lowest according to all that i have come across) totally unoriginal as atleast half have some twist but this is just trash
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I like it. The beginning was hilarious. Keep up the good work.
dang I really want to read it but I don't have a money does anyone know where to read this for free ? heheeh
Translation Quality: 5. Nothing wrong here.
Stability of Updates: 5. Nothing wrong here.
Story Development: 1 star. Oh boy. Hey, let me ask you something. If you received a potion (drug) that'd help you lose 20 lbs a day, would you be worried or thankful to the maker of it? (Thankful, obviously. There's no way losing 20 lbs in a single day'd have any adverse effects, right?)What would you do if you found a drunk woman on the streets, and she wasn't sober enough to give you her number or address to send her home? (Bring her to a hotel, obviously. It's not like you're pretty much right next to a police station...) Overall, Story Development is absolutely the worst, I'm not even exaggerating.
Character Design: 1. Extremely forced, the characters in this novel are the least realistic thing I've seen on this site, excluding the R18 fanfictions. See (Story Development).
World Background: 1. Urban fantasy, face slapping-esque, harem novel. With dumbed-down characters, to boot. I love urban fantasy, but this is just the same cultivation-modern day novel recycled over and over again, and these novels all tend to be horrible. It is horrible, actually.
2.6 stars. Lowest possible rating I can give in terms of the story, it's just crap.
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Typical cultivation novel we get on our everyday's life when we see the synopsis, bla bla bla bla... I can be wrong bu whatever, I'll give my **** to rate this **** and 1 star is more than enough with that synopsis. Now I'll **** off
Hey guys!
ApocX here! If you didn't start reading this novel, I suggest you start right now. It is definitely something you will enjoy, especially for those VRMMO and Romance novel fans! ;)
Don't mind the shameless 5 Star Rating.
Update Schedule - Daily.
I still have my main novel Stronghold In The Apocalypse to write so I can't write more.
Enjoy reading! :)
P.S If you leave a bad review for the story, then make sure it's something that would help in the improvement of the story, because I sure as hell would delete it.
That moment when you discover a video game novel is not complete trash, or an isekai, or even hentai novel is actualy good. That moment when our mind is blown by how it breaks apart your common sense built over the years. A genre which is always cliche, repetitive, similar, and obvious defaults, has a novel that is actually not below 3.5 stars...
This story is just god awful. Don't read it. We have an extremely boring plot with an MC who just watches people play a game and a "loli" by his side who the MC decides to kiss and be a pedo. The readers seem to lap it up.
I've read up to chapter 549. The story so far is entertaining. You have epic battles, a smart MC and an interesting plot that unfolds over time. However, there is a few deal breakers. There is a disgusting amount of misunderstandings in this fic. It gets to the point that its so unbelievable that it becomes another form of plot armor. Then we got reoccurring themes. Where a battle happens, the demons are losing until the MC and his immortal army swoops in. They then proceed to steal everything, get over whelming praise for their 'sacrifices', before the gamers start to ask everyone for a mysterious quest and the MC tells a sob story for cash. This repeats itself every freaking time no matter what small arc or scenario that occurs. And finally, the thing I hate the most is how in Beta version 1.0, they have 50million people joining. What happen to it being only 50thousand? The author forgot about what he said and goes into great detail on how only the chineses are allowed to play the game and the westerners are crying about the unfairness. The westerns tried to reverse engineer the gaming capsule but they couldn't do it. Now they have to sit at home and watch the glorious chinese having fun. 'Its kinda obvious what this is hinting too' Besides all these issues, this fic is a nice time sinker. It is above the other chinese fics and on par with the gamer fics from korea. Give it a try and you'll enjoy it.
Now a few issues I have with the plot. First, all the gamers are naked savages. Second, there is no defined form of leadership/control over the gamers. Third, the MC doesn't recruit anybody to his dungeon to fight for him it is only the chaotic gamers. Fourth, there is alot of foreshadowing of the MC, but nothing is ever explained until the author just wants to add random stuff to his backstory on a whim. Finally, there is no character growth what so ever.