An interesting spin on the whole reincarnation shtick. I am definitely tuning in to find out how the plot unfolds with such a unique MC.
Good job!
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Different from synopsis. This is a live stream novel of a priest. I repeat this is a LIVESTREAM novel. Till now he doesn't get holy light/ability to talk to animals/holy sword!
Interesting ……………. !
I see potential here and hope that it keeps it up. story isn't mind blowingly unique but is more like a fresh breeze after a long period of stagnant air. No system at least as of yet but just good old slow story progress and thas coming from someone who likes systems.
i would love to say great ending but it costs too much to just end in the middle of the book as a finished story if I'd have known i wouldn't have wasted my fp and credits on a fraction of a finished book good story bad writer for doing half a job even if its for pleasure its stiil paying you for premium
It’s going well right now and definitely has a lot of potential. Although I am surprised this gem isn’t getting the attention is should have which is such a shame since this deserves a lot more readers
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Don't worry about the grammar. You can hire an editor for that. A proofreader can also do the job of finding plot holes for you. Now, zombie apocalypse novels are a tough genre. You need to research all weapons be it melee or firearms, etc. You also need to be realistic as it was a modern survival thing. I can see that the story is going good so far and it has potential. The direction of the story is also superb! Good thing is, the characters are lifelike. I hope you improve your craft shortly. Will wait for that time to come
Hello everyone, I am finally reviewing this work of mine for the first time ever after 462 chapters! *Caresses his beard in utmost seriousness*
Before anything, let me give you a short version of what you will be getting yourself into:
Think of Virus (MC) as Pinocchio, only, instead of a doll, he’s an extremely advanced artificial intelligence who coincidentally jumps back in time to our current Earth.
Anyway, the Pinocchio of our story who had been just an artificial boy his entire life enters a biological body, thus becoming a real boy!
Now, the real boy of our story together with futuristic knowledge at his beck and call starts cultivation while actually utilizing that very knowledge of science and technology.
However, now that he’s a real boy, he starts experiencing problems and issues he never thought were possible.
As you read into the story, the world will get bigger and bigger as unexpected developments, both small and large, will take you by surprise and leave you flabbergasted.
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If you ask me, is [The God Virus] worth my time and more? I can only say try it and decide for yourself, don’t let my or anyone else’s bias affect you. Still, if you did indeed decide to give it a shot, persist through some of the pre-cultivation slow burn and neophyte writing at the earlier chapters and get to the real cultivation stuff and you’ll see what you had nearly missed.
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Some of the things you can expect to see in the story:
1. Cultivation is extremely unique, I don’t just randomly add stage names and say he gathered even more energy this time or whatnot and broke through from the first level to the second level, then from the second level to the third level, and so on! There is a specific system of cultivation that will make you enjoy immersing yourself in the process as you get to the real cultivation stuff!
2. Virus is very smart in brain matters, an extremely intelligent anti-hero main character that doesn’t fear destroying all those hindering his path if he wants to, I say this with confidence and you will agree unless you forget what Virus’ main goal in living and the core of his personality is at each specific point in the story.
3. The writing quality increases as you advance, you will feel the writing quality leveling up the more you read into the story. However, even in the earlier chapters, you won’t have any difficulties understanding the sentences, they flow smooth enough, only that the writing quality may be lower comparatively.
4. Let’s get this out of the window as well, Virus is no saint, he’s not selfless, I mean he’s named Virus for God's sake, did you expect him to be like Mother Teresa? *Flings aside his white beard violently*
5. Yes, there’s a deep romance happening, but it won’t be the main focus of the story.
6. There is so much more I can say, but why should I say it when you can read it and decide for yourself? Anyway, if my brief introduction hooked you, then I guess you’re in the right place.
No sukuna, he/she ruined the character by making him a different personality................. No sukuna, he/she ruined the character by making him a different personality................. No sukuna, he/she ruined the character by making him a different personality.................