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I loved Mike's selfreflections and internal comments. There were lots of places I loughed out loud. In a way he reminds me of Dexter (another character I like so much) Overal I've really enjoyed this story. Thank you.
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I like it. The story is good, and the MC is competent. They actually care about the things that they create, and are actually pretty strong, despite being a stone. I like this book.
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Gotta say this right here is a masterpiece. I feel like everyone should give it a read, you won’t be disappointed. Only problem as of right now is that there’s only 11 chapters, but that’s alright cause I can wait.
Overall score as of 11 chapters
10/10
Keep up the great work author
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pls hurry with the chapters, this is too exciting, the author did his reseacrch, this a masterpiece.....
nice......
Hey, I am the author of this book, and I just have to say that I am doing my all to make this book a good read, and that I hope you enjoy it!Thanks for reading!
So, I am interested in the kind of stories that take place in a video game, and most of them usually do make for interesting stories. The worldbuilding in this book is exactly how I imagine worldbuilding in MMORPGs. The main protagonist is likable, the characters are well-developed, and the way the story flows and moves is addictive and charming to read. This is a great book!
This is a good story among so many trash webnovels. While people will think in the first chapters why the MC doesn't Just sleep until he becomes OP,it will be explained later. The MC doesn't want to be OP without doing nothing. Just think about it,how boring your life would be if you were OP (Just like Saitama)? You wouldn't feel ALIVE and the MC Is Immortal,so... This is a new world with many new things to see and we know that there is a Universe and Multiverse to explore. I hope in 200-300 chapters we Will be in another Planet and It would be cool if the MC creates an army throughout the Universe with the groups of people he helped because it would be like a Family and the MC won't feel alone
A quick spoiler-free review, as someone who preread the first 25 chapters. You will not be disappointed with this novel. If you enjoyed Rwtss, Elyon's work, or the fantasy genre that includes unique twists with reincarnation you will not be disappointed. The book has many similar elements to the author's past works and the world-building, description, character development, and urge to "READ MORE" is done wonderfully.
Try this book out if your looking for a story that strays from typical tropes and creates a wonderful new world you can imagine inside your head.
While I do like the story..it's feels like it was made for kids..the time spent describing the event that happen in the Mac's school is way more than the dedication the time actually spent on improving the story development wise..i feel like whatever happened since Chapter 1-69 has no bearing on the story and it's something that can just be said in passing. I have only read up until this point but don't really feel the excited to continue.While it's sometimes exciting, you are immediately doused with water after 2 or 3 chapters
