The synopsis is very good and also interesting. The character are also well described, I like how the character explain his feelings. Very nice work, keep writing✨✨✨
The premise is interesting but everything is too predictable and boring, the writing is okay tho.
are you okay author-san? I miss you...please come back soon.
the story, characters, and world seem interesting. it's just difficult to see it under the mountain if grammatical mistakes.
I read less then a page and I hate it, the main character is a random seller whose poor but is perfectly healthy and super hot n handsome apparently, and he gets the best stuff by luck, yeah a bunch of nonsense
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Recommended. Great story full of laughs with an amusing narrator. Only a few grammatical issues and parts that could have been worderd better here and there but not so many that it interrupts the flow of the story. Lots of good references. Great fun. Hopefully the chicken gets more character development soon.
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I barely read FL because some people tend to make the female weak and all about romance so I am glad you did not make her weak.
There are some grammar mistakes and remember that periods and question marks go inside dialogue not outside of it.
I like the characters interactions, it is lighthearted and fun. Your story is very insteresting and knows to keep a person reading.
Keep up the good work!
I've read only ~40 chapters in MTL, so this novel might be better than I think. (but it might be worse :D)
It starts well. Not OP system, clever MC. But then MC starts coming up with super innovative ideas, which actually should be almost obvious for others(e.g. assigning ids to armors to be able to identify manufacturer). At first, it seems not bad, but after 3-4 "innovations" it gets rather annoying than fun. And long descriptions of those innovations don't make it better.
I really liked how author has set up the conflicts within this novel whether it be the little conflict of him Celine or him wanting to live a normal life against all odds, it sparks interest and curiosity which makes me want to read it further.
The comedic undertone and unique setting is also hilarious. Kudos to the author.