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The story line is good, the language style is easy to understand so that the readers feel comfortable while enjoying the story. This story has a good style of language that makes the storyline interesting to read. There are many life lessons that can be emulated based on the story above
Here is another pushover son-in-law story where family members of the wife hate the MC, are promoting others to sleep with their daughter and money minded people. The wife herself doesn't like the MC and doesn't believe a single word from him, makes him work like a servent and says you have done nothing for me. The MC is also typical powerful hidden young master who is living with in-laws who claims to be loving the wife who doesn't allow him to touch her.
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I am sorry, but this is sadly a good novel. I made it 21 chapters in, I quit because there is no logic in the story. An enemy ’s troops die to the MC, so he leveled up. That makes no sense. Also has some anti west prejudices, with characters made at the “west” for no reason. The only way for this to be funny is if the “dragon country” is Wales. Also a translation of adventurer was changed to hero for no reason.
raw link pls
absolutely love the concept been waiting for something like this,
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Hello author I am a fellow trope here to support you, nice work, and keep this up and in the future, you're going to be in the big leagues. And a nice choice of topic btw, I love it.
Very nice so far. Haven't seen any errors in your writing style and your word choices are quite intriguing, to say the least.
Synopsis: Tbh, this is the only part of the book that I didn't truly like. I do find it appealing whenever authors include a section of the story within the synopsis which you did quite well. However, you never really mentioned what the story was about which is why I didn't give the full 5 stars. All I got from the synopsis was a little insight into the characters' personalities and that it seemed to be a cultivation novel. Would be good if you added a bit more information on the entire setting of the story.
Writing Quality: You could normally consider me part of the grammar police. However, there were no mistakes that I saw within your grammar or writing. It was all perfect unless I overlooked something which I hope I didn't. Great Job!
Story Development: Pacing is a little slow at the start but that's fine. Keep doing what you're doing.
Character Design: Not much said here. You barely described the characters unless I overlooked something. You only used broad terms like "Beautiful" etc. But that's perfectly fine as it is a matter of preference. Some readers like to imagine how the characters look instead of having them described by the author.
Overall, a great job so far. The book has potential and I wish you all the best author!
So, not really a review (for good balance i put a 4/5) because i'm just near the 15th chapters.
Honestly the writing etc. is good but i lack passion for this one.
I think the "sims simulator pov and writing" is killing me (i know for the cliffhanger about that).
if it's like that all the time, I'd rather quit.
If a charitable soul can answer me that would be nice.
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Everything is perfect keep up with the good work. Also regarding mental health look for support groups and a psychologist it helps a lot.
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