This was a disappointing read, throughout the entire story, the MC, Miles, literally has no character development, and he makes dumb choices that either injure his pets and himself, for example, besides the beginning, he does not ever use his Attractiveness Value again, if he would just use it, so many problems could have been avoided, he is literally refusing to use his Golden Finger/his cheat. There are so many useful things he could've done with his system that he just ignores. And the villains, side characters, love interests are all as generic as they come, the villains are a group of people that he somehow offends and manages to encounter every time. The side characters are mostly all arrogant, constantly changing sides whenever someone says something dumb about the MC, the love interests are overall annoying as usual, constantly hindering the MC's development. Lastly, he always causes the problem that he puts himself in, and honestly, I could go on and on, but overall, just a bad read, slightly decent in the beginning, but just continues to degrade as the story continues since the Author obviously has no idea what to do next.
This is a more recent review of my own novel. It's not joke review, and I would like to dedicate this to people who are interested in reading this novel.The start is a bit slow due to the worldbuilding, but worry not, things will kick in. You might think that there's a lack of action and romance at the start, but again, don't worry. Things will truly start to consistently progress after a certain torture scene.Anyways, this story is actually hardcore sci-fi disguised as fantasy. So I hope you guys won't mind if the story switches genres in later parts.
Very Nice Story Progression as of chapter 24 so i am looking Forward to the Future development of the pornhouse. Also MC seems to have a Natural Talent for all of this. And the Girls all have a Personality and aren't Just Blow Up Characters.
No, I’m not a bot. I’m an avid reader and have kept up with all of your original works on wattpad, tbh this was the first story i read made by you and ever since i’ve been hooked on all your other ones. Keep up the good work!
This isn't your typical reincarnation story. Which is pretty great in my opinion. If you enjoy stories about war or anything related to the romance of the three kingdoms. You would enjoy this story despite its flaws. The main character isn't extremely over powered and the author was able to devise a proper balancing mechanic in the beginning. If I only read the first half of the story I would've of given it a 5.0. The reason why I had to rate it a lower level is because of several reasons.
The first reason is the main character is starting to become a different person. In the beginning of the story you are introduced to a main character that understand he isn't a genius. He has to be cautious and mindful of all his actions. Its the reason why he spent so much time and effort to recruit capable strategists. He gathers information, asks for opinions before he makes any major decisions. Yet, now the main character no longer asks for their opinions and makes rash decisions.
The second reason is the main character doesn't exactly understand how the mechanisms of this world actually work. Neither does his lover who was a demon from hell. Her mother does and shes currently in the world as well. If it was the former main character after he discovered she was in this world he would've of asked her how the rules of the world work in order to make himself stronger and used this advantage against other sinners. But this hasn't happened which makes it even more infuriating!
The third reason is a pretty big one. You know whats worse than a omnipotent and omniscient main character? An omnipotent and omniscient antagonist. Don't you love novels when the antagonist/s is able to predict, anticipate and convince every other person in the world to go after the main character for no reason at all? Whats the likelihood a person in modern earth would have extensive knowledge of the waring states in china? Unless you are obsessed with dynasty warriors, a war tactics addict or dramas from this period its very unlikely. Yet the remaining sinners are all quite knowledgeable about this period. Hell even the former antagonist that was the sole mortal enemy to the main character was. Which wouldn't make any sense with his backstory.
The fourth reason is the novel no longer has any "balance." In the beginning of the novel we had a system where you'd lose lifespan when you used a skill. The "players" in the world had a advantage over the natives because of their skills, but they had to pay in lifespan. For example one of the sinners has a skill that can can create anything. From skills from other people, to gold, to even clones of other people. He can literally make anything. How the **** is this even legal. No, how isn't this person dead already. This isn't a skill its a goddamn console command. The author is nerfing the main character while buffing his opponents. Did the main character end up playing ******** mode?
The fifth reason is the current plot has become so convoluted it can be frustrating for a new reader to get into the novel. A perfect example is in the story we learn that heaven and hell exists. You have angels and demons and humans can become either one after they die depending on their karma. So in that case what the hell is a cultivator? Is he just a angel than because he has angel wings? Why is he trying to turn the native population in world into angels? Why is it possible for a sinner to become a angel? With all their negative karma aren't they more suited to become demons instead? Wasn't the reason why they came into the world was so wash away their sins? Wasn't the reason they came into this world in the first place? But now without completing the game they can just become angels?! Why isn't their a demon trying to turn the native population into demons? We learn that heaven and hell went to war, but we don't know the reason. We haven't had any chapters dedicated to it either.
I'm not trying to be nitpicky I actually want the author to succeed. Hes working hard and hes pretty dedicated and it sucks to see the novel in such low rankings. In my honest opinion this novel probably needs a remake to make it more palatable to new audiences. The karma thing you had with the main character and the dead antagonist would've of been more interesting. For example after he died his soul could have ended up corrupting or taking over another sinner making that person want to kill the main character for revenge. Or he could've been consumed by his heart devil in his lust for power. Maybe he could've of corrupted the angel? The angel seems to have potential to be the final boss, but in current plot shes just a minor villain which really wastes her potential. I really enjoy your other novel by the way. You might want to rename it and give it a better cover I'm sure you'd get a lot more interest that way. Its a shame you need to focus on this one more.
This novel is the first one which I have read from male character point of view and maybe that's why I started reading it in the first place. It also is very different from other novels. I liked every character in this story. It is great that you do not made ex as bitchy as it is in every other story. Seriously I have never read sex scenes like yours, very hot in the start and very funny and weird in the end.
The beginning of the story was good but after that the story starts to get very slow and boring not to mention that there is a character that many people don't like
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