What would happen if history took a different course back in 1898 and the Filipino revolutionaries learned of the secret negotiation between the American and Spanish forces in Manila?
The story telling is very good. I like the way the author made this. It's different to many war stories, mainly because it feels like it was commentary from a history book. I liked it, I hope the author continues the book. Really interesting and delightful. I wonder what will happen next. I will be waiting.
Its pretty good, the grammars good, the characters are good but can be totally improved, although I know the characters are like that because this is like a fast overview, so its okay. The writing style is okay and can be improved. Overall it's a pretty good story. It's not confusing at least so that's a plus ?
A really great story and realistic i can't stop reading this book its really good
Looking forward for the next chapter__________________________________________
This story overall is actually not that bad but it's fascinating this is like alternate history hub you know the YouTube channel. Also this story literally imagine what life can be like.
