Lucio_Fay
Wonderful author and story in the making here. The story is wonderful and has amazing concepts. The character design is well flushed out and has realistic personality. THE MOST AMAZING PART IS THE UPDATES it is very hard nowadays to find a good author that has stable updates.OVERALL WONDERFUL AUTHOR AND MY BEST WISHES TO THEM!
I LOVE THIS BOOK!!!! The descriptions and overall writing style, characters, and plot are amazing. They all are very unique. Rowan is very cute, and Wren deserves all the pastries!!
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Literally this is one If not the worst slave system Novel that I have seen.
Read chapter 9 before chapter 1 becouse you will probably drop this so instead of wasting time go start there where you will hight probably drop if you are a slave system hater.
I sincerely hope the Author will be.... read my comment in chapter 9 I fear this Review will be deleted if I continue with my sentence
So many grammar mistakes. The story itself is good but the writing takes all the positives away from it. Definitely try to cure this. Other than that the story and characters are good and I like the development. I still enjoy reading this a lot.
I got to 38 and iam tired of the stupid stuff it had amazing potential but I Just don’t think this author is the right one for it and Breaking the 4 th wall sucks on my opinion
Can't wait for more.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Couldn't help but compare this book to the "I became the gravekeeper for the great pyramid of Giza" book due to the tower defence theme.
This book is literally the same but with a cultivation background and with a slightly more established motive.
Since I gave 9.6/10 for the Gravekeeper book I'll give 10/10 because I prefer this one.
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This novel has potential.It develops characters and has no sudden forced plot.Tha author has improved a lot from the beginning as I know because I was reading this book from the beginning .Keep Going
En one side yaru illa nee than - unnala naa pala naal stomach valikka sirichi irukka. - nee different ta thericha - unna yaru kudayume compare panna mudiyathu - athan un plus
Excellent Novel. Keep it up.
