A good story so far. Shame the updates arnt frequent
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this novel is so dumb who wrote it?MC is brain dead MC gets in constant conflicts for no reason surely the author doesn't know how to write a novel
overpowered annoying female charactersthe first one was still finethe second one, his teacher , I quitdropped out at chapter 66why just why whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
It’s not worth it. There is no plot. 40 chapters, and there is not a lot of story progression.The author focuses too much on trying to world build by telling (not showing) us the history of things that have happened.They do not focus on the characers.Speaking on the characters, the real main character appears to be Anna as the author spends most of their time with her and her perspective. Which would be fine if the synopsis or initial part of the story sold it as such. No, it feels like it was switched on you halfway through.I read despite the terrible writing quality that only gets slightly better after chapter 11. Even though the story has great promise, I realized its not worth my time. And I am reading the free chapters. If I had to unlock chapters to read more world building with no story progression or about their tribe hunting… would not happen.There is no kingdom building when I stopped reading.
Good story so far. Keep it up and update more. There are some punctuation writing mistakes other wise good overall. It doesn't seem like English is your 3rd language.
how many arcs will this have I just started reading it and it feels like it'll be long but I don't know lol????also does anyone have any fan art of masahiro?
Although I wouldn't say it was the finest novel I've ever read, it was still rather good considering it was your first. The noises were the only thing that bothered me; yes, I realize that you repeated them to let the reader comprehend that they were sounds. I thought some of the laughter was inappropriate, though it may have just been "ha ha" or "haha." Some noises also were. The ticks rather than repeat could of be "the tick repeated over and over again." rathe than tick tick tick tick.
Disapointig translated novel. Mc with low IQ high ego and 0 good points goes 10 years back in time 2008y but into illogical parallel world that has all that our world has but all big wigs are matial artists. I think beside being arrogant dick and stealing from his little sister mc has nothing going for him. Translation is so so too as it does not bother to translate all words like for example university exam...
To wn development team: This has lot of fake reviews here with no content or with same copy paste from different acounts. Is it normal now to let this crap be as reviews?
This is one of the review from novel-updates
""" It's tolerable for the first 150 chapters, I read 150 - 400 chapters simply because I invested time into the story and didnt want to drop it. Chapters 400 - 640 was pure sh*t and 640 is where I dropped it because all it was for the last 250 chapters was Chinese nationalism.
From chapters 400+, the MC was supposed to work with american soldiers to save a journalist. After the MC saves the journalists, it is just american soldiers ****ting on china and the soldiers using derogatory terms towards the MC. After the mission to save the journalist was over they decide to kill the MC because he is Chinese (ofc). The MC kills all the American soldiers and goes back to china.
The next mission is going to japan (you should know where this is going). Same thing as above. Chinese people abducted by Japanese people. Japanese people say sh*t bad sh*t about Chinese people. MC kills people for being evil.
Next mission MC goes to america and fresh off the plane, people he knows are being bullied and insulted for being Chinese. I dropped the novel right there because all this novel became was some sick hate driven garbage.
Im over it. """
Just read chapter 1 and I can tell you that this novel will be great. I always love this types of novel. Please don’t disappoint me
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