One of the few gaming novels out there with the MC taking a magic route instead of warriors/thief so i had high hopes for it. However, there is too little description that the story seems all over the place. It seems to me that the author has the image in his head but somewhat fails to transfer that into his writing. I don't need massive info dumps but the lack of details during battle as well as the surrounding area makes it hard to imagine what is going on. That in turn doesn't draw me into the story because i can't picture it. It is still early so perhaps that will improve. I also hope we learn more about the world, real and in game. We don't know anything about the MC aside from the fact that he works in a company with beauties and a friend and that he is good at his class in a game to pay for his sister's medical bills. right now, this is the type of novel you read if you got nothing else to read. or you skim through it because the little descriptions doesn't draw you in enough. i hope this improves because this does show potential.
