Hi! Author here leaving an honest review.
I want to improve my writing because I knew this is mediocre and I want to make it better.
I use too much exposition and find that I can’t write good conversations.
there will probably be a lot of inconsistencies because as much as I try to note down all of the information that I use (seriously I have like 16 pages of notes for like the first 30-40 chapters) I will inevitably forget something.
Pls give your suggestions on how I should improve, I take criticism well so do your worst.
(P.S I will write a chapter ever 1-2 weeks and I should have around 2k words per chapter, no promises to either of those though *teehee*)
Now at I have read it 4 different times I can't keep my mind off of this novel can someone tell where I can find another one like this where the mc is good at all music and artist craft
The story is very interesting and fun to read it has some flavor of a few other novels that it took inspiration from but it still retains it's own individuality and has a very good chance of being a top novel on the app if the chapters can keep coming
5 stars of course!
Apart from the amazing writing and all the tattle, it's because I'm in the story.
Read it! I command you!
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another story that is bomb with 5 star review without even a reason nor hinting why it deserved to have 5 star? why is 5 star bot so rampant in webnovel?u200d♂️?u200d♂️?u200d♂️
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The world background is poor. I wish the author would give more details regarding the era. There is no backstory nothing.***********************
Good stuff!If you like evil and ruthless MCs then you'll probably love this. The pacing is a bit weird and all over the place at first, but it does get better. The story and the mc is interesting, and the villains aren't stupid like other novels tend to make them out to be.I do think there are some issues with some of the storylines, and how it suddenly jumps to another storyline almost immediately, but all in all a good read.
I'm just read 8 chapters and totally into this. Though that Pendragon one is an info dumb. Author did a lot of background research to make the story close to the facts. keep it up!!!!!!!
Not disappointed reading this. The cliffhanger ending of each chapter keeps you hooked and want you to come back for more. Development is quite good for a game based novel which I really love