I don't understand how this is so highly rated. Characters are shallow. Concept seemed interesting but seeing the protagonist trying to be Bodhisattva ruins it completely. Attempt at comedy is poor. World building is not detailed. You can read it but it was not enjoyable for me.
An ok story ,some grammar mistakes ,Below average Story line some ideas taken from other novels no need to mention them ,misleading title is why i started i thought it was gonna be a chill novel ,till i got to chapter 36 where the author decided to make it 17+ which leads me to believe there will be some pretty rapey stuff , harems,multiple wives = milk those stones from viewers and build a harem with it lmao wasted time is all i see ,anyways good luck -1
Exceptional story, decent story building, though leaves much to imagination for now. An awesome story with a good amount of action and plot even though its tempo can be a a little mixed at times ( too fast, or just slow enough to feel frozen sometimes). Not gonna say too much as the story hasn't ended yet but this is a must read for those who want a good story without a template to follow like most novels out now.
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some chaps r whack but that's what this novel more exciting.. probably change the age restrictions a bit but its fine.. I want to see more of the main protagonist and less of the detective stuff but izz okay..
Having a blast with this one. Opens with great hook as the protagonist fights for his life out at sea against creatures and is apparently drowning, before jumping back in time to bring the reader up to speed. The writing style is certainly unique and the author is a great story-teller. Moves at a great pace which keeps the reader glued to the screen. Certainly seems like an epic novel thus far. Good effort.
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This a really good novel
Have a lot of potential
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Overall pretty good. Writing quality was okay; punctuation could use a little work as well as capitalization. I would mainly use more commas to separate phrases. The author has created a vivid and interesting MC, and the story has a cool premise. Keep writing author! Looking forward to seeing you and the story grow!
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