It's simply an all round five because even as an Indian Hindu, I find the tale more interesting and a nice masterpiece. I'll encourage everyone out there to read this, it's good stuff
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the novel is very good to me but i gotta comment about the really slow update
if you like really overpowered main character this is your right choice
(** : i gonna love this if his gonna turn out to be harem novel )
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A story involved not just with standard Isekai fare but actually contending and resolving the problems internal and external that the character may have because of their fantastical construction or convoluted relationships. This is explored by being more dark, gluttonous and lustful than some of PancakesWitch's other works and is all the better for it. Just don't expect to stay in one place too long, a time skip will quickly remedy any notion of a modernist daily life story being told.
I have no complaints about the novel other than the stupid MC. (I suspect the MC is a girl.) The pace of events is good. The characters are colorful and pleasant. Characters with feelings and thoughts and flaws. I don't know why this novel is not widely read. But with a steady stream, it would make a great novel.
Really like how you used the concept of rebirth as a POV.
It is really interesting and hpfunny at the same time.
Synopsis is interesting and cover is really pretty to!
Interesting premise - wondering the direction that the story will go. I really enjoy reading the story. Great job author, just take care on some of your grammar mistakes.
Hi, Author here with a shameless 5 star review despite my story saying otherwise. The purpose of this is to clarify some things about this novel and its story to the viewers.First, this book is not meant to be some amazing story with unique plot development or anything truly extraordinary. If that was what you are looking for, then this isn't for you. This isn't to say that I plan to write a copy and paste story with repeated clichés all over the place, but I won't go into this novel expecting an amazing story with plot developments and story arcs that have never been done before. This novel was always something I started writing to fill up my free time and also finally act on my passion for writing which brings me to my next point.This is the first novel I have ever written. The quality is not going to be amazing and honestly, I am already extremely happy with the support I have gotten for this book so far as it was completely unexpected to me.Now, to clarify the biggest doubts about the story, this is NOT A HAREM!! Personally, I love harems... when they are done well that is. Unfortunately, I neither have the skill nor confidence to say I can write a good harem story with interesting characters and epic character growth and development between the MC and the female leads. The MC will interact with various women throughout the story but the story will not progress into a harem. If that was what you were looking for, this is not the novel for you. Also, you may see some negative reviews and comments about the early chapters of my book and I am ashamed to admit that most of those reviews were true. However, after I finished the first volume, I went back and took the time to make corrections to the earlier chapters, making Lake appear less like a creep and the reaction between characters feel more realistic. Although I can’t say it completely fixed all of the problems with the early chapters as I was still deeply inexperienced when writing them, it helped to deal with the major ones. These changes did not affect the overall story in anyway so if your someone who has read ahead already, there is no need to go back and read these chapters.Finally, like I said before, this is my first novel, so any feedback or flaws you may have spotted in my novel, whether they be grammatical errors or your personal opinion on the story is always appreciated. These things help to progress my writing skills and allow me to gain a completely new perspective on how to approach writing a story arc or chapter which all helps to improve the quality of my work.If you still choose to stick around and continue to read this book after reading this review, I appreciate you taking the time to read this novel.
This story has a lot of epic royal fantasy vibes. I would say fans of game of thrones or the remarried empress would enjoy it. The star gem aspect is also interesting, keep up the good work!
please translate this novel 我为道祖，开创仙道！
So I have been non-stop reading this novel's raw chapters. I'm way up in the 300s now. Man this is such a good story! It focuses on facts, real statistics and brings attention to real conservation issues. It manages to do this WHILE being interesting and a page turner of the likes of which I haven't seen in a few years.
This is an 11 out of 10 across the board.
I'll read it here as well just to get better translation but I doubt I'll be able to put down the raws at all.