septimus_heap7
all these novels are the same, he's going to be a pleb first and then rise to be the daoist master after a few years of hardships. aiya, well, we will see if it's decent soon enough.
Just stopping here to give the classic 5 stars that every author gives!
This is my first novel about cultivation, video games and systems, but I've had in mind for a long time the idea of this novel and the concepts and mechanics that I'm applying, so you can be sure to read something consistent!
Besides, that's all I want to say, enjoy the reading.
Also feel free to use the comments on this review to ask questions.
Only free chapters are properly translated. Rest is mtl.
Bit of a slow start so far with a lot of information that is kind of out of nowhere without context. Likely stuff that will be cleared up within the first 100 or so chapters, but honestly this is the reason I think with these new novels they should release with a minimum 100ch backlog immediately. It really hurts them in the short term, since people are impatient and want something decent and new to read right away. It also means the early reviews like mine tend to be a bit on the low side due to lack of information and depth story-wise to give it anything better. I simply can't right now, however I will obviously edit my review in later chapters if it picks up.
absolutely amazing novel and the aristocrats are getting slapped in the face. the girls are interesting to say the least and the concept of literally forging maidens is is of the charts of ideas.
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Dont be fooled by the 5 star reviews of people with standard as low as Hitlers wife. Or they are just troll/fake accounts. But anyways
1. Description is awful you're not reading a World created by an author, but instead just being told what to think up. The most descriptions are going to get about anybody is maybe if you're lucky color.
2. This has the standard plot of born into a wealthy family wealthy family suffers and some b******* plot armor superpower. And just to clarify it's not even a unique superpower just a very by the Numbers system.
3. Once again this book is the type what's the author says something about the main character which cannot be seen through the characters actions or thoughts, such as claiming that the character is an old man in a child's body. The points that was trying to be made was he was very mature or clever. News flash he isn't, he's very childish and it does not act the age expected of how old his soul is.
4. And also for people who don't like first person, I happen to be one of those people I still Tried reading cuz I heard the author was actually good (I was lied to), not only is this first person but she will randomly go into 3rd person and he simultaneously will a mix past tense and present tense.
5. The word usage is very fanfiction like, AKA it is limited it to the vocabulary of a fifth grader and it doesn't set any type of mood or feeling while reading the book.
6. They're also a whole bunch of other small things which could make this review 10 paper essay more well-thought-out than the book itself. Life wasted enough time on this :novel" as it already is.
Trigger warning! This book is way overrated!
By far one of the best novels I've read on webnovel. World building is superb, even filler chapters feel important. Not to mention, the main character is an actual person with complex motivations.
The translation is too bad and the book is not readable. I won't say this if the translation was bad still could understand the story, but the translation makes it so bad that the book changes the name of the same person multiple times.
Hello, Eshwar here
Very good series! I enjoyed reading it, and I expected it to honestly be cliche but boy was I wrong.
This is one of my favorite novels out of your others. good pacing, very well written and good comedy lol
